The rift now is filled with your redolence,
That now is my identity;
My breath now smells of orchids !
Wait, did you say "You like enchanting my frills"
My frills are significance of delirium ,a state that now I live in,
You want to know the secret behind my mystic eyes ,
The miracle is power driven from the ,
Mirth and joy that I feel in your existence,
And will stay as long as am surrounded by your magic;
Your wand is behind the mysterious eyes !
Do you know you came late,
Yet flooded this heart with smiles
The smiles that had become now extinct;
You know ,you are now my wings
I will fly as long as you stay put , in this little life
That was close to the brim ,
And thought it was the result of my past ,
My sins!
Now dont go as long as I live
You dont know in your magical field
How I feel.
You said "I am an angel ,I live in your heart"
Hold me , dont lose me in madding crowd.
With your love by my side
I am sure to thrive ,my life
You now have become my wings !
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Very cool poem friend.
ReplyDeletethank you animesh.
Deletewow!!
ReplyDeletethank you dr sneha.
Deletehmmm kyaa baat hai Alka ji...subah-subah 'Aahat' aur afternoon mein 'Mirth'...I have all praise for your writing skills...these happy ones perfectly match with those sad ones...
ReplyDeletepahle toe aap mujhe alka ji nahin kahen ge bus alka kahen ge :) dusra thank you sooo much.
DeleteAbsolutely Beautiful!
ReplyDeletethank you shamsud.
Deletethank you frank .
ReplyDeleteVery passionate, Alka:)
ReplyDeleteyhank you rahul.
Deletebeautifully composed..I have seen others writing words and giving it a form of poem; u seem to be feeling words, and it makes it a poem by itself....
ReplyDeletethank you sooo much hemant.
DeleteVery Nicely Penned!! Love ur choice of Words to Emote..
ReplyDeletethank u vineet.
DeleteAhhhh Loved it as always Alka, what more can I say. :)
ReplyDeleteyhank you soooo much akshay.
DeleteMy dear Alka,
ReplyDeleteThere is so much love and warmth in this. "My breath now smells of orchids"...WoW! So profound. There really is no greater expression than love. Love can make you crazy in a good way, but it makes you feel alive! Reading this gives me a sense that you have found love again. Is it so? (smile) This is magical, beautiful, sensual. LOVE your image. Awesome writing dear friend. Thanks for sharing.
Please join me for the debut of the Lovers' Cove Challenge on May 26th. All you need do is compose a line of 15 words or less, BUT you have to write your line based on what the previous person has written...that's the challenge! Sounds easy, but is it? Do come over.
Then, don't forget to join me for the second Blog Hop Saturday! on June 2nd. There are no rules as such, you just linkup, visit a few/all of the others in the Linky (hop) & have fun. Invite your friends, everyone is welcome...hope you can make it!
Alka, falling in love all over again? :)
ReplyDeleteNice one
sont ask anything mak just pray fr me :)
Deleteyes andy,I am still not able to believe it bt ys i has happened hope he stays ...sure i will be there on both the occasions :)
ReplyDeleteso magical, inspiring and romantic:)
ReplyDeletethank you soo much sanjeev
Delete:):) sweet...
ReplyDeletethank you bhavana
Deletei am so happy for you alka may your joy multiply manifold & love be eternal.
ReplyDeletethank u soooo mch indu.
Deletebeautiful poem Alka!
ReplyDeletenice use of the words, more like the writings of Khaleel Gibran and other poets!
regards
Rahul
thank you sooo much rahul
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