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Friday 16 March 2012

endless wait

                                                   
                                                     Wait  , my endless wait
                                                          naked my body ,
                                                        hacked to ground ,
                                               trying to hear a distant sound ,
                                                  you must,uncover my fate ,
                                                            naked i lay
                                                 for you , to heal my wounds ,
                                                             strayed ,
                                                               lost ,
                                                       need some light ,
                                                       show me the way ,
                                                        heal my soul ,
                                                        naked i lay,
                                                      on bare ground !
                                                      Don't go away ,
                                                     cast your sights ,
                                                    try to hear my sighs ,
                                                         my pride ,
                                                          my ego ,
                                                        everything ,
                                                     I lost on the way ,
                                                       need no bathe ,
                                                       my naked soul ,
                                                   showers of  sun shine ,
                                                      let it embrace
                                                            and
                                                  take away some pain !
                                                     My endless wait ,
                                                      for an embrace ,
                                                      take me home,
                                                      am now cold ,
                                                   left with no place ,
                                                  petite I have become ,
                                                        in front fate !
                                                            In
                                                     my fight to  rise ,
                                                         my hair
                                                          now
                                                         turned ,
                                               some silver and some grey ,
                                                     still no respite ,
                                               need you to  hold me tight ,
                                                   eyes, they gaze
                                                   through the dark ,
                                                          ears
                                              I try to hear a distant sound ,
                                                  echos is all i hear ,
                                                nothing is very clear ,
                                                     I lit a light ,
                                                in a secluded place ,
                                                need your favour ,
                                                 read out my fate ,
                                                         else
                                                  blow away the light ,
                                              I lit in a secluded place ,
                                            to distract your attention
                                                    for you to
                                                  pay attention ,
                                                         on
                                                    petite this life ,
                                                  frail  my frame ,
                                                 my endless wait !
                                            Pleasure would be mine ,
                                     if you passed by my secret place
                                                   where i lay
                                             naked and chaste ,
                                                          no
                                                  need to bathe ,
                                                          I
                                              left every thing behind
                                               for a little embrace !
                                                   
                                              
                                                 copyright(c)alkanarula
                                                  photo credit protecting your crown and glory                                            
 

56 comments:

  1. except for scrolling continuously to keep pace with the flowing verses, everything else was superb... ;)

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    1. haha...thank you phoenix !
      sorry couldnt work on duet ,ws a li'll tied up will be posting it v soon :)

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  2. this is amazing and lovely poem....to write your feelings is different, but feeling your words is really the best...kudos:)

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    1. thank you soooo much elvira..its a pleasure to have you back with your lovely comments :)

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  3. This is one of your finer poem...love it..it has a fantastic pace. Thank you for sharing

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    1. thank you sooo much shamsud...every compliment from a senior poet like you is an honor for me :)

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    1. thank you sooo much rahul...its a pleasure to have been able to deliver something you like.

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  5. Again couldnt understand :( have you done english hons. from DU ?

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    1. hehe ,why neeraj..its my communication with god !
      well not DU but owe it to J&K state ;)

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    1. thank you sooo much for your support and encouraging comments amit

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  7. left every thing behind for a little embrace !

    agony... and irony... no words... simply loved it..
    very true...

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  8. Alka, you continue to amaze me with each and every post of yours. Way to go:)

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    1. Awwwww kajal,every comment of yours i take as feather in my cap..thank you sooo much.

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    1. thank you soooo much for youe=r visit and valuable words gayatri.

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  10. you feel deeply. Why the "from" without an O in the title?

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    1. yes @Life Unordinary..you got me right, well i used a shorter form of from thats it..

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  11. Another awesome one Alka jhi :).
    I really love the way you write poems :D :).
    Truly splendid :D

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    1. didnt see you around for few days....glad to hear frm you again..thank you sooo much princess poo...

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    1. thank you for taking out your valuable tie to read it and for your valuable comment @ SB@One Cent At A Time

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  13. How sensitive you are Alka,& how well you depict these feelings---great poem.

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  14. AWWW! This is just so good Alka! Truly oozing from your heart! Wow. Amazed I am really :)

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    1. thank you sooo much Jen...you made my day.

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  15. Really nice post. Goes with the title of your blog, "Deep from my heart"

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    1. thank you Marita...your words mean a lot,thank you once again.

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    1. hey hearing from you after a long time...thank you soo much for your kind words seema.

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  17. lovely poem dear =)

    though i'll need to re-read to grasp the meaning even more!

    thank you for the post =)

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    1. thak you raphael... give me your honest openion once you have re-read :)

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  18. Wow!!!!! am totally awestruck!

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  19. It is so wonderful that i am reading it again and again and feeling it quite soothing to be lost in the poem with every read.

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    1. thank you sooo much for your valuable words..they mean a lot to me @ neeraj

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  20. love it love it love it...you put words to my heart!

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    1. thank you thank you thank you bhavana :)

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  21. The words speak of a story... Pain is beautifully blended with words which emote the feelings of heart... cheers ... take care

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  22. Well well well....these lines indeed tell a story. something coming deep from within..
    Painful though beautifully written

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