At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Friday, 16 March 2012
endless wait
Wait , my endless wait
naked my body ,
hacked to ground ,
trying to hear a distant sound ,
you must,uncover my fate ,
naked i lay
for you , to heal my wounds ,
strayed ,
lost ,
need some light ,
show me the way ,
heal my soul ,
naked i lay,
on bare ground !
Don't go away ,
cast your sights ,
try to hear my sighs ,
my pride ,
my ego ,
everything ,
I lost on the way ,
need no bathe ,
my naked soul ,
showers of sun shine ,
let it embrace
and
take away some pain !
My endless wait ,
for an embrace ,
take me home,
am now cold ,
left with no place ,
petite I have become ,
in front fate !
In
my fight to rise ,
my hair
now
turned ,
some silver and some grey ,
still no respite ,
need you to hold me tight ,
eyes, they gaze
through the dark ,
ears
I try to hear a distant sound ,
echos is all i hear ,
nothing is very clear ,
I lit a light ,
in a secluded place ,
need your favour ,
read out my fate ,
else
blow away the light ,
I lit in a secluded place ,
to distract your attention
for you to
pay attention ,
on
petite this life ,
frail my frame ,
my endless wait !
Pleasure would be mine ,
if you passed by my secret place
where i lay
naked and chaste ,
no
need to bathe ,
I
left every thing behind
for a little embrace !
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except for scrolling continuously to keep pace with the flowing verses, everything else was superb... ;)
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