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I don't think I can call it poetry ....honestly I got a little lyrical today
A light one hope you enjoy reading it...
Like a star shining in the sky
that disappears , when the sun smiles
You don't forget to say "you are mine"every morning ,
but disappear in the moon light
Is that the way to say "stay away ",when I begin to believe your eyes
when I am on cloud nine
Can I ask for one night that wont see the next morning
that will stay till late
Can I see you once next morning , when I open my eyes
when I rise , can I see your face
Now don't you say " God has been so kind , at least we met
so feel great , my love for you will never die , I am here to stay "
I am gonna hold my breath next time for a while , scare you once
so that you know , how you would feel when I am not there
Now don't you make that face , nor I care for that awful glare
your hot red eyes set me on fire , feel me I am ablaze
Can you see the droplets above my eyes , my nape too
has begun to perspire , feel me every where
Hold me , sway with me , relieve me of pain
brush your moist breath against my body , touch me with your angelic tips
and say " you are mine " over and over again !
copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit photobucket.com
Sensuously beautiful!
ReplyDeletethanx magiceye:)
Deletefeelings touch us with such serenity indeed.Lovely post Alka.
ReplyDeletethank you amit :)
DeleteEnjoyed! Thank you Alka:)
ReplyDeletepleasure is all mine amit :)
DeleteYour presentation always blows me away and then I read the lines and it's equally good :)
ReplyDeletethank u ghazala :)
Deletesaying it over and over again - Alka you are the best- sensuous;)
ReplyDeletethank u elli:)
DeleteThe rhythm/flow was so nice.Loved it!!
ReplyDeletethank u @devil on wheel :)
DeleteExemplary presentation about nature.
ReplyDeletethank you @indiamap :)
DeleteRead it twice.. :) Capturing words!
ReplyDeletethank you haritha :)
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeletethank you rajesh :)
Deletelovely :)
ReplyDeletethank you daniel :)
Deletesensuous...
ReplyDeletethank you panchali :)
DeleteDeep from your heart!
ReplyDeletethank you indu :)
Deletethank u jaish :)
ReplyDeleteawesomely beautiful :)
ReplyDeletethank u vinisha :)
Deletevery musical !
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
DeleteLovely one there!!! :)
ReplyDeleteDo stop by my blog!! I'd love your visits & comments!
thank u rahul :)
DeleteWOW.. very beautiful and passionate as well.. very vivid presentation.. enjoyed it.. good one Alka..
ReplyDeleteoww.. beautifull.. ^^d
ReplyDeleteA nice verse,Alka:)
ReplyDeletesuch heart touching poetry!!
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Lovely...:)
ReplyDeletekeep writing...:)
This as beautifully rhythymic...!!
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