next time when i heard the whisper that went unheard ,every time he came to wake me from my sleep......i held on to him so tight that he was left with no choice but surrender and stay back with me !!
next time he kissed my lips , this time i knew was real and not the one i felt in my dreams.......i held on to him so tight gave not a moment to blink his eyes and kissed him back on his lips , that i had missed for some time !!
he gripped me so tight nor did he realise until he could see a ring of smoke around me .......the heat was felt on both sides that both of us didn't want to let go......that moment was just so right to drown and feel love that we lost control on our souls !!
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Lost controls of our souls.... beautiful... gives me a idea... thank u for that :)... awesome lines ya :)
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Hello.
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As one who exists for & in the image of love, I know only too well how sweet it is to surrender to love.
Tender, sensual write.
Thanks for sharing.
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I enjoy reading this my friend, and I am sure I will be here next time. The design is more friendly now, before I went here but it hurt my eyes but now I love the design, and I can now appreciate more on the content. Keep you imagination coming :)
ReplyDeleteam glad this post was useful to u:)thank u once again thousif for ur consistent support
ReplyDelete@andy thank u for visiting my blog and for ur kind words:)true surrendering to love is very sweet:)thank u once again and wish u a happy new year..
@prime thank u:)yes i did get some feedback regarding the font so changed it..ur feedback is always welcome if theres any other problem with the font or anything regd the design or anything do let me know..thanks for visiting..and wish u a happy new year:)
@ alka true surrendering of love, my thoughts exactly... i think we should write a poem together... what say wanna try out? :)
ReplyDeletethousif i dont mind we could probably write a duet together:)
ReplyDelete@ alka: tell u what suggest a idea on which we could write together and mail me ur piece... i'll fill in my part send it to u again... u can edit it and mail it on ur blog... i'll put a link on my blog... :) what say?
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brilliant idea..please give me ur email add..and i will send u a few lines,when u continue write ur name- and continue then i do the same and we go on and i put ur link on the post as well:)looking forward to it..
ReplyDelete@ alka: my email id is thousifraza@gmail.com. Hope to hear back soon from you :)
ReplyDeletenoted...will mail u soon
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