life in my bedroom with sound of silence around ...... i look at the walls and widen my eyes...... to read the inscriptions not visible to eyes.......where to go , i wonder is this the way to go on...... i think of the wrong decisions i made in life.......and i wonder was that me or was it the life that made me choose ....what was not right and went wrong.....the doors are closed.......my knocks go unheard, no one by my side... rest of my life how will i survive....no one i met who could steal my heart.......no one i feel is search of love and is around for some reason unknown....strange is life ...at times i feel i should close my eyes..... as there is no soul .....who is honest and true .....i dont believe ,it can happen this life..... but who knows theres another life to come .....or was there one in the past.....we pay the price for wrong deeds we have done.....but where as i know i was cautious all my life not hurt a soul .....nor play with no ones heart....but then why this silence around .....
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The silence around is for you to find yourself.... :) Tis all temporary until the learning is done. Btw, true emotions felt in each word... :) For the one who hasn't harmed anyone r anything, fear is far from near... :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much for yr constant support phoenix:)i thought i shd respond to your comments by not replying in the comment box ,so i dedicated few lines to you .. do go through thm :)
ReplyDeleteI did... i commented there too... lol... :-D
ReplyDeletethe path to wisdom
ReplyDeleteWELL WRITTEN.
ReplyDelete"but who knows theres another life to come ....." cling on to this optimist note....be happy and keep writing nice poems..
ReplyDeletevry touching poem on silence :)
http://campbuzzz.blogspot.com/
I can empathize with you Alka :)
ReplyDeleteoh yes we have to pay the price.. right or wrong well depends on the situation for us it may be wrong for someone its the right ..
ReplyDeletelife indeed is very very strange .. it wud be boring if it was otherwise ..
loved the way you have used the words .. remind me of my life to me
Bikram's
why this kolaveri Alka :P:P:P
ReplyDeletebreak the silence .. start enjoying life ..smoke worries in air.. after all life is too short to live every moment..
@phoenix lol:)i love ur comments
ReplyDelete@magic eye hopefully it is the path to wisdom:)
@mohit thank u for visiting and for ur kind words:)
@saikat thank u so much:)i will cling on to the optimisn:)thank u once again
@akshay thank u:)
@bikram very well said..true what may be right for us may be wrong for others and vice versa
@rahul thank u for visiting and for ur comment:)love the kolaveri part of it:p true life is to short
@bikramjit again hey i went through your blog mr.wierdo enjoyed a poem tried to comment but couldn find the comment option..
ReplyDeleteI dont know what cud be the problem but hey good to see you at my place thanks :) see you around
ReplyDeletewierdo me hmm hmm yyyyyyyyyy :)
Bikram's
bikramjit am sooooooooooo sorry,actualy i confused ur blog with someone elses and his blog name was mr.wierdo on which i couldnt comment am so so so so sorry..i did go thru ur blog agn and managed to comment really verry sorry for this confusion,i didnt call u mr.wierdo it was the persons blog name soooooo sorry for this confusion and mix up:(
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ReplyDeletethank u for ur kind words:) and for stopping by hope l get to hear frm u again soon:)
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