i loved the way you held me in your arms and whispered that you are in love before i could say something.....
i loved the way you kissed my eyes and whispered i am your love before i could say something.....
i loved the way you put your hand on my lips and held me tight before i could say something.....
the music that played in the night was astonishing and the lights were not so brilliant but just right ,everything seemed perfect we were like two bodies but one soul throughout the night........... i wish i could live through that night once more when i couldn't say something.
i loved the way you run your fingers through my hair before you pulled me close before i could say something......
i loved the way you looked into my eyes before you placed your lips on mine before i could say something.....
i felt the warmth of your breath from distance before you touched my soul , and drove me wild before i could say something.......
"Oh" that beautiful night, when the grip of love was so tight that we couldn't stop and swayed and held each other tight , the lights were not so brilliant but just right for that moment of love,when the music and your whispers drove me wild throughout the night..... i wish i could live through that night once more,when you stopped me before i could say something .
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wow! the post sure sets off the valentine's mood!
ReplyDeletea valentine mood without a date , smile :) thanks Kajal:)
Deletewas the ending intentionally sad or did i just feel so cos of my damn life? :O
ReplyDeletethe flow is much liked :)
no sawan, end wasnt sad ,its about past that probably i wanna live again :)
Deletesorry sawan i forgot to add , i would love to be stopped ovr nd ovr again and experience the wonderful moments ,smile :)
DeleteThank you sooo much for liking it and your valuable comment :)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Alka.. loved it !!
ReplyDeleteThank you sooooooooooo much :)
ReplyDeleteI WANNA SAY SOMETHING....ITS REALLY FABULOUS ....LUVD UR WAY...HAHAHA
ReplyDeletethank u elvira:)
DeleteWonderful words. You have been able to keep the tension of the emotions intact right through the work. Very masterful.
ReplyDeleteoh wow..am abs speechless..thank you sooooooo much:)
DeleteWow! Brought back memories! Simply beautiful! :)Valentine's is here!! :)
ReplyDeleteam glad u could relate to it:) a happy valentines to you:)
Deletewow so romantic !! A mix of love ,night .. that's awesome !!
ReplyDeletethank you ben:)
DeleteShe moves in Mysterious Ways..:)
ReplyDeleteIt is with her that I could be the real me.
ReplyDeleteThe one who thinks silly thoughts,
The one who gets into kiddish talks.
I am not afraid what she thinks about me and neither is she.
We truly are strange friends.
She completes me in every sense.
I have never in my life felt like this.
It is deep, It is innocent
How can I tell how I feel when she smiles.
She is the one with I can be just me,
No fronts, no guards, no pretenses,
In her arms I could be just me..
i am am sure she too has realised,the way i feel when i am in her arms....the feelings are deep and she knows how i feel when she smiles....she is the one who makes me complete in real sense....oh,what a feeling....though truly we are strange friends...we are not afraid what we thing about you and me...she is the one who gets into kiddish talk...i hold her close and know she is the one...with whom i could be the real me ...ohhh real me :)
ReplyDeleteAnyone reading this would want to be your valentine! ;-)
ReplyDeleteLovely post...
:) thank you soooo much pranita.
DeleteAwesome write... ♥
ReplyDeleteIts such a beautiful feeling to be lost in love!
Beautifully expressed... :)
v true hanan , and thank you v much for your visit.
DeleteI liked the fluency of thoughts !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing , nice post !
I liked the girly layout u have for u r blog
smiles...thank you rahul :)
DeleteWow....This is Picturesque!...Loved reading the post...
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem at just the right time, Alka, with a befitting backdrop to enhance it!!
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beautiful romantic ..
ReplyDeleteHappy valentines ...
Bikram's
beautiful balance in a lov poem ... knowing where to stop and flow and fly again...thanks 4 the read
ReplyDeletevery very very nice......just touched heart....
ReplyDeletethank you soooooooo much for liking it ashish.
Deletean awesome poem to set out moods for valentine!!!
ReplyDeletehmmmmmmmmm thank you shishira
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