Few moments away from
being carried away by dust and storm !
Here I lay silent in the dark ,
In two yards of terrain
in my resting ground !
Now am away from frenzied crowd !
Far away from madding sound !
The fancy garb I adorn , feels so warm !
Free and calm , fearless I have become !
Am on my way ,can hear eternal sounds !
No tremors I face ,
no more I frown !
Fragile I have become , lighter than air
lost my aspect !
Few moments away from being carried by the soil !
Few flowers you placed ,will be washed away by the storm !
The fancy garb I adorn will remain buried in the ground !
My memories will fade in days to come !
WONDER
A QUEST I RAISE
When my each fragment was raised from dust and storm
my remains would be rendered to either ashes or flames
how could the soil I was made from got carried away
with glister and glaze
WHY DID IT CRAVE FOR CONTENTMENT ALL LIFE
why couldn't it resist opulence,why couldnt it wait
when it was aware of
THE ULTIMATE TRUTH OF LIFE
TWO YARDS OF TERRAIN
The glister and glaze would be left behind !
copy right (c)alkanarula
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alka - a moving poem..you have got me humming the lines in my mind..thanks
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DeleteVery soulful, Alka, very poignant!
ReplyDeleteindeed we come into the earth naked and die naked , we bring nothing and take away nothing with us....
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well said saikat:) and thank u sooooooooooooo much
DeleteWhen my each fragment was raised from dust and storm
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remain my favorit4e lines
thank u debu:)glad u liked it
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ReplyDeleteawesome poem, i could rhyme while reading this poem.
archiving this in my mailbox!
regards
rahul
Your writing escalates my expectations of you Alka! Soulfully amazing! :)
ReplyDeletethank u jen...i hope i will live up to ur xpctations:)
DeleteA sensitivity aliveness,even in completion of life,Nice!
ReplyDeletethank u arpana
Deleteyou left me speechless.... a storm you created touched me so deep that it took me away for long time and i even forgot to comment.. :)
ReplyDeleteawesome work... very touchy,, heartfelt..
awwwww...that is soooo sweet...one of the best comments have ever recieved.....thank u so much:)
Deletesoulful, moving poem
ReplyDeletethank u sujatha:)
Deletevery profound! Absolutely beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteExtreme words straight from ur hearts touchy feel! :)
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ReplyDeletethank u usha:)
DeleteThat was a deeply philosophical poem.
ReplyDeletethank u:)hope u liked it
DeleteDeep!
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