At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Tuesday, 3 April 2012
Autumn and The Spring
On my knees , I am your patron ,
an admirer ,
hold you in high regard !
your blessings are my strength !
I abide by all your rules !
To move according to your signal is my duty !
have no wish of mine !
Will live and die
the way you want me to !
you have all my strings in your hand !
You own me ,I am yours !
Which ever path you show is mine !
I promise to bear
all the pain you confer on me ,
with a smile !
Half way through my journey ,
I have a question on my mind ,
hope you wouldn't mind answering with a smile !
You are a perfectionist ,
Sun and The Moon ,
Ocean and The Sea ,
Autumn and The Spring ,
every creation of yours
is a paragon of your perfection ,
but where did you go wrong
when you created life ?
every soul ,
every animal ,
every human being ,
though beautiful
suffers in one or the other form ,
you are the master crafter ,
you are the one and only one ,
who is the master of this theatre and this theme ,
but
why don't you recede pain ,
and fill up the empty space with joy ,
that one seeks !
I
truly don't want anything for me ,
but
save me from sufferings
sufferings of others ,watching them
my heart bleeds !
copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit i cafe
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Good Question! Maybe God answers that with life i gave choice and it is your exercise of choice that makes you imperfect!
ReplyDeleteNice thought-provoking poem.
hmmmm...food fr thot i guess:)
DeleteIts easy. The concept of a god is just a mass mental delusion.
DeleteHow deep is this... loved it.
ReplyDeletethank u:)
Delete...reminds me of "I fall upon the thorns of life I bleed"...beautiful, Alka!
ReplyDeleteoh thank u soooooo much:)
DeleteWonderful....beautifully done..
ReplyDeletethanks shamsud:)
DeleteYou are being tested by god, and now its your turn to show your creator that you can endure the pain and sufferings and come out of it a winner.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully your have expressed those emotions, Alka. :)
i guess u r rght akshay:)thank u
Deletemade me speechless with your lines...expressed so beautifully:)
ReplyDeletethank you elli...
DeleteYou asked the million dollar question that keeps ringing in my mind! :) Loved the poem..!
ReplyDeletethank you gayatri: p
Deletewhat inspired these verses?
ReplyDeleteno inspiration really...just came from within:)
DeleteYou have hit it hard.. "wathcing them my heart bleeds". Hats off to you Alka. Great work.
ReplyDeletehi mak thank u so much...i went through your blog somehow am unable to comment on ur posts der seems to be some problem from my side... :( will keep visiting...and can mail u my comments if u r der on indiblogger:)
DeleteWell done...
ReplyDeletethank u:)
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