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Tuesday, 3 April 2012

Autumn and The Spring

                   
  


            On my knees , I am your patron ,      
                          an admirer ,
                 hold you in high regard !
             your blessings are my strength !
                 I abide by all your rules !
     To move according to your signal is my duty !
                  have no wish of mine !
                      Will live and die
               the way you want  me to !
       you have all my strings in your hand !
                 You own me ,I am yours !
        Which ever path you show is mine !
                      I promise to bear
            all the pain you confer on me ,
                         with a smile !
              Half way through my journey ,
             I have a question on my mind ,
     hope you wouldn't mind answering with a smile !
                  You are a perfectionist ,
                      Sun and The Moon ,
                      Ocean and The Sea ,
                    Autumn and The Spring ,
                  every creation of yours
             is a paragon of your perfection ,
               but where did you go wrong
                    when you created life  ?
                          every soul ,
                        every animal ,
                     every human being  ,
                     though beautiful
            suffers in one or the other form ,
                you are the master crafter ,
              you are the one and only one ,
  who is the master of this theatre and this theme ,
                              but
               why don't you recede pain ,
        and fill up the empty space with joy ,
                      that one seeks !
                                I
           truly don't want anything for me ,
                              but
              save me from sufferings
       sufferings of others ,watching them
                    my heart bleeds !                             

copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit i cafe
         
       


             

21 comments:

  1. Good Question! Maybe God answers that with life i gave choice and it is your exercise of choice that makes you imperfect!

    Nice thought-provoking poem.

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    1. hmmmm...food fr thot i guess:)

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    2. Its easy. The concept of a god is just a mass mental delusion.

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  2. How deep is this... loved it.

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  3. ...reminds me of "I fall upon the thorns of life I bleed"...beautiful, Alka!

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  4. Wonderful....beautifully done..

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  5. You are being tested by god, and now its your turn to show your creator that you can endure the pain and sufferings and come out of it a winner.
    Beautifully your have expressed those emotions, Alka. :)

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  6. made me speechless with your lines...expressed so beautifully:)

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  7. You asked the million dollar question that keeps ringing in my mind! :) Loved the poem..!

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    1. no inspiration really...just came from within:)

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  9. You have hit it hard.. "wathcing them my heart bleeds". Hats off to you Alka. Great work.

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    1. hi mak thank u so much...i went through your blog somehow am unable to comment on ur posts der seems to be some problem from my side... :( will keep visiting...and can mail u my comments if u r der on indiblogger:)

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