My words I say , are a reflection of my life and the state of my heart ...my emotions so strong ,you cant weigh them until you feel my breath that comes deep down from my heart......
Sometimes I am in deep pain ,at times I question like a naive .....my convo with the mirror came to an end when I began to write my musings on the wall....
I may not be there but my words will remain buried deep down in your heart....some day when I am not alive..you might think of the past....and rhyme my words that come straight from my heart.....
Such is the power of words ! I came and will live my life the way it has been described by the stars.....I will leave nothing behind nor carry any thing forward...... but the words will and stay alive till you decide, its not worthwhile remembering me when I am gone .copy right (c)alka narula
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As impressive as ever... Words spoken can never be taken back..Alka.. you are a delight.
ReplyDeleteWow! Superb lines... :) So true actually... Words r so powerful n they r immortal... Not only will they stay alive till the person decides, its not worthwhile remembering when you are gone, the words will stay even after that... ;) Btw, you can make the necessary changes in the duet n post it... I couldn't find a replacement for the phrase you asked me to change. The title is gr8. :)
ReplyDeleteAlka, I earnestly request you not to write depressing poetry like this...it chokes...(btw IT IS VERY BEAUTIFUL)
ReplyDeletesure amit :)...thank you !
DeleteYou have powerful words to convey your emotions....your convo with the mirror ended when you started writing, not worthwhile remembering (though very painful)
ReplyDeletethank you hariharan !
ReplyDeletewords .. yes they do a lot and are something that cant be taken back.. one needs to be very careful what they say .. :)
ReplyDeletea lovely poem once again
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thank you bikram :P
ReplyDeletewords are thoughts embodied..
ReplyDeletethank you magiceye !
Deletewhen the pain erupts... the heart cries, the soul blooms and searches the soul within.. awesome again
ReplyDeletethank you bhargav.
ReplyDeleteSuch a delightful read ♥
ReplyDeleteI loved this... :)
thanks hanan i loved your quote of the day the shakespear one...but somehow am unable to comment on ur posts:(act.the problem is from my side der r a few blogs am unable to comment on for a month now:(
Deletei read it, i re-read it and am just loving it...amazing..thanks for sharing this Alka !
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thank u and thank u and thank u:)
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