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Monday, 28 May 2012

Dreams II


A closet of dreams ,
few accomplished few un achieved ,
I opened the door for you to see
the ones you can accomplish
and
complete ,
like a comatose , like a deceased
I felt without you though I lived ;
be my anchor , navigate me
you are my oar, take the lead ,
widen your arms a bit
accommodate me ,
I am within your reach ;
now let me feel
your warm  breath ,when you breathe
like a novice  I want to feel ,
with you around
when you take the lead ;
my heart pounds when I see the gleam ;
let me drown in your eyes
now don't let the gleam recede ,
my closet of dreams
lies open for you to see ,
here's the key to closet of my dreams ,
don't fear the sound its my heart throb
anxiously waiting for you to turn the key ;
 give me every thing that's in your means


copyrigh(c)alka narula
photo credit photo bucket

18 comments:

  1. So nicely weaved, liked it a lot :)

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  2. that was really nice. I could hear the heart throbbing. :)

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  3. loved these lines :"here's the key to closet of my dreams ,
    don't fear the sound its my heart throb
    anxiously waiting for you to turn the key ;
    give me every thing that's in your means"--lovely!

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  4. ...let your heart throb like this and keep giving us beautiful feelings to read...and appreciate:) Lovely, Alka!

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  5. you write so well..! Henceforth, a blind follower of your posts:))

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    1. thank u panchalibolchi , u made my day.

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  6. hmmmmmmmm beautiful

    and heres wishing all ur dreams come true sooooooooooonnn

    Bikram's

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  7. closet of dreams... love thinking about that.. beautiful as always :)

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  8. Nice Poem Alka... cheers!
    Reminded me of the song "Dream" by Everly Brothers;


    "Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
    When I want you in my arms
    When I want you and all your charms
    Whenever I want you, all I have to do is
    Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream"

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    1. ys vijay i heard d no ,beautifu lyrics , thanx :)

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  9. Dreamzzz...beautiful...beautiful...beautiful:)

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