At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Monday, 28 May 2012
Dreams II
A closet of dreams ,
few accomplished few un achieved ,
I opened the door for you to see
the ones you can accomplish
and
complete ,
like a comatose , like a deceased
I felt without you though I lived ;
be my anchor , navigate me
you are my oar, take the lead ,
widen your arms a bit
accommodate me ,
I am within your reach ;
now let me feel
your warm breath ,when you breathe
like a novice I want to feel ,
with you around
when you take the lead ;
my heart pounds when I see the gleam ;
let me drown in your eyes
now don't let the gleam recede ,
my closet of dreams
lies open for you to see ,
here's the key to closet of my dreams ,
don't fear the sound its my heart throb
anxiously waiting for you to turn the key ;
give me every thing that's in your means
copyrigh(c)alka narula
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So nicely weaved, liked it a lot :)
ReplyDeletethank u bhagyashree :)
Deletethat was really nice. I could hear the heart throbbing. :)
ReplyDeletethank u leo paw :)
Deleteloved these lines :"here's the key to closet of my dreams ,
ReplyDeletedon't fear the sound its my heart throb
anxiously waiting for you to turn the key ;
give me every thing that's in your means"--lovely!
thank u soooooo much bhavana
Delete...let your heart throb like this and keep giving us beautiful feelings to read...and appreciate:) Lovely, Alka!
ReplyDeletethank u sooooo much amit
Deleteyou write so well..! Henceforth, a blind follower of your posts:))
ReplyDeletethank u panchalibolchi , u made my day.
Deletehmmmmmmmm beautiful
ReplyDeleteand heres wishing all ur dreams come true sooooooooooonnn
Bikram's
thank u bikram
Deletecloset of dreams... love thinking about that.. beautiful as always :)
ReplyDeletethank u neha
DeleteNice Poem Alka... cheers!
ReplyDeleteReminded me of the song "Dream" by Everly Brothers;
"Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream
When I want you in my arms
When I want you and all your charms
Whenever I want you, all I have to do is
Drea-ea-ea-ea-eam, dream, dream, dream"
ys vijay i heard d no ,beautifu lyrics , thanx :)
DeleteDreamzzz...beautiful...beautiful...beautiful:)
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
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