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Monday, 7 May 2012

musketeer

                       tiger


                       Like a raft without an oar,
                       like a kite without a string,
                            I move I swing ,
               though you chopped all my wings ;
                         now when you say
                       that you cant believe ,
                 without an oar without my wings ,
                  without a string how do I swing ;
                            you must know
              I am a knight rider , I need no strings
                am a musketeer , I need no wings ;
                       will prove you wrong
                 that you chopped my wings ,
            will prove your thoughts are your whims ;
            when I cross the bulwark and shall walk ,
                              like a cougar
                and force you to go in deep thoughts ,
                    was  it worth giving me the pain ,
            was it worth hurting me and leaving me slain ;
              you thought you could intimidate this heart ,
                  you only gave me a reason to laugh ,
                           and made me strong ;
                            you never thought
                         like a bull on rampage
                     I shall walk and get what I want ,
                    while you think about your whims
                              and your vows
                that you wont let me reach the shore,
              let me bear sweet agony some sweet pain ,
               that makes me strong and makes me laugh ,
              for a while go back again in deep thoughts
                                      and
                    think of a way  to save your face !

copyright (c)alka narula
photo credit  photobucket

28 comments:

  1. The positive spirit of the poem is amazing. Loved it. :)

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  2. Your charm for writing down poems hasn't changed one bit!! :)Love it Alka! :)

    Btw,Sorry for the late "Thank you for the Award" post!! Would love you to check my blog!:)Thanks again!! :)

    TC!xo

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    1. good to see you arnd , sure will chk tr blog soon.

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  3. Good that you are giving it back on his face Alka. Love the spirit of this poem. It is oozing with positiveness.

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  4. Simply beautiful .. :)
    Follow each other.
    xx

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    1. sure i will ,thank you soooo much bubbles.

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  5. Amazing!! You have put it so well, Alka.. you are a magician with words and emotions. I especially love this poem of yours. Would like to feature it on my blog. :) May I?

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    1. thank you sooooo much punamjr, sure you can feature it on your blog but pls leave my link and once again thank you sooooooo much :)

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  6. That was amazing one...beautifully composed full of +ve spirit... :) :)

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  7. ...limits of courage and high spirits, Alka!...the mockery in the last line is sort of poetic justice:) I loved it!!

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  8. Choicest words, Alka in this nice weave:)

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  9. Awesome! Love it when women kick ass!!! Loved it Alka!!! :)

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  10. Optimism I love it! Great poem! :)

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  11. Thats a great perspective! Gr8 work!

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  12. Think should save it somewhere and read it everytime someone heartlessly hurts....Would soothe the soul for sure...Beautiful...

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  13. beautiful ... loved the imagery and the underlying spirit :)

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  14. wooow...so positive and full of optimism and hope !

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