Like a raft without an oar,
like a kite without a string,
I move I swing ,
though you chopped all my wings ;
now when you say
that you cant believe ,
without an oar without my wings ,
without a string how do I swing ;
you must know
I am a knight rider , I need no strings
am a musketeer , I need no wings ;
will prove you wrong
that you chopped my wings ,
will prove your thoughts are your whims ;
when I cross the bulwark and shall walk ,
like a cougar
and force you to go in deep thoughts ,
was it worth giving me the pain ,
was it worth hurting me and leaving me slain ;
you thought you could intimidate this heart ,
you only gave me a reason to laugh ,
and made me strong ;
you never thought
like a bull on rampage
I shall walk and get what I want ,
while you think about your whims
and your vows
that you wont let me reach the shore,
let me bear sweet agony some sweet pain ,
that makes me strong and makes me laugh ,
for a while go back again in deep thoughts
and
think of a way to save your face !
copyright (c)alka narula
photo credit photobucket
The positive spirit of the poem is amazing. Loved it. :)
ReplyDeletethank you akshay.
DeleteYour charm for writing down poems hasn't changed one bit!! :)Love it Alka! :)
ReplyDeleteBtw,Sorry for the late "Thank you for the Award" post!! Would love you to check my blog!:)Thanks again!! :)
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good to see you arnd , sure will chk tr blog soon.
DeleteGood that you are giving it back on his face Alka. Love the spirit of this poem. It is oozing with positiveness.
ReplyDeletethank you mak :)
DeleteSimply beautiful .. :)
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sure i will ,thank you soooo much bubbles.
DeleteAmazing!! You have put it so well, Alka.. you are a magician with words and emotions. I especially love this poem of yours. Would like to feature it on my blog. :) May I?
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much punamjr, sure you can feature it on your blog but pls leave my link and once again thank you sooooooo much :)
DeleteThat was amazing one...beautifully composed full of +ve spirit... :) :)
ReplyDeletethank you cynosure...
Delete...limits of courage and high spirits, Alka!...the mockery in the last line is sort of poetic justice:) I loved it!!
ReplyDeletethank you amit.
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeletethank you rajesh .
DeleteChoicest words, Alka in this nice weave:)
ReplyDeletethank you rahul.
DeleteAwesome! Love it when women kick ass!!! Loved it Alka!!! :)
ReplyDeleteyeah shreya and thank you :)
DeleteBeautiful and courageous :)
ReplyDeletethank you puru .
DeleteOptimism I love it! Great poem! :)
ReplyDeleteThats a great perspective! Gr8 work!
ReplyDeleteTHat is a positive one ...
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Think should save it somewhere and read it everytime someone heartlessly hurts....Would soothe the soul for sure...Beautiful...
ReplyDeletebeautiful ... loved the imagery and the underlying spirit :)
ReplyDeletewooow...so positive and full of optimism and hope !
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