At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Sunday, 17 June 2012
Khrysos
A juvenile , in your world
pristine like a pearl ,
the way you out lined ;
in your wonder land , in your world
lonely yet free ,free to unfurl
but you denied, denied the freedom
to this girl ;
when I told you , the secret that I learnt
you didn't revert nor you heard ,
that I was trying to share , was trying to make you aware,
what is ringing in mind ;
now when like a khrysos (Greek meaning gold)
burnt alive to emerge as shining gold ,
when I have become sterile;
in mode of unfold , now when I unfurl
you turned and told some one , I heard " you are abashed ,
for your command for you couldn't govern "
I feel I should bow to you , your command
and you should know
it was you , it is you and it will always be you
who would be in command and who would rule ,
no matter how many times
I surrender to merge in this earth to re-emerge in your world ,
remember , had you not smoldered and stirred me
I would have remained a juvenile ,a pearl in this world .
copy right (c)alka narula
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wooow .. such a beautiful use of the words .. very well written Alka ..
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thank u debopam :)
Delete...very beautiful!
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Deleteso true , when juvenile we were so innocent .. now got corrupted tooo
ReplyDeletelovely poem
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thank u bikram :)
Deletewow ...its lovely !!!
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Deletenice lines..
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Deleteaah...how beautiful--the lessons life teaches us and the way it makes us grow and grow wiser!!!
ReplyDeletethank u bhavana :)
Deleteit was you , it is you and it will always be you
ReplyDelete:))))))))))
DeleteWonderful poem. Loved it . . .
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thank you ashwani :)
DeleteEach word worth it weight in khrysos, Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
DeleteGirls are mostly denied the freedom to unfurl their wings-happy are you that you managed to do it.
ReplyDeletethank u indu :)
DeleteWe are often molded through the various things that life tends to throw at us as we go on... But we do become better after the molding process is over!
ReplyDeleteWell written Alka! Awesome post!
thank u danny :)
DeleteSuch a nice composition. Well done.
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Deletebeautiful! khrysos! ;)
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DeleteAwesome Alka.
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Deletewonderful thoughts penned in a play of words:)
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