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Sunday, 17 June 2012

Khrysos

                        

  A juvenile , in your world
 pristine like a pearl ,
 the way you out lined ;
 in your wonder land , in your world
 lonely yet free ,free to unfurl
but you denied, denied the freedom
 to this girl ;
when I told you , the secret that I learnt
 you didn't revert nor you heard ,
 that I was trying to share , was trying to make you aware,
what is ringing in mind ;
 now when like a khrysos (Greek meaning gold)
 burnt alive to emerge as shining gold ,
when I have become sterile;
 in mode of unfold , now when I unfurl
you turned and told some one , I heard " you are abashed ,
 for your command for you couldn't govern "
 I feel  I should bow to you , your command
 and you should know
it was you , it is you and it will always be you
who would be in command and who would rule ,
no matter how many times
I surrender to merge in this earth to re-emerge in your world ,
remember , had you not smoldered  and  stirred me
 I would have remained a juvenile ,a pearl in this world .

copy right (c)alka narula
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36 comments:

  1. wooow .. such a beautiful use of the words .. very well written Alka ..

    yipee .. me be the first one to publish a comment here !

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  2. Wonderful composition... Thank you for those relaxing words...

    http://debnature.blogspot.in

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  3. so true , when juvenile we were so innocent .. now got corrupted tooo


    lovely poem
    Bikram's

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  4. aah...how beautiful--the lessons life teaches us and the way it makes us grow and grow wiser!!!

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  5. it was you , it is you and it will always be you

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  6. Each word worth it weight in khrysos, Alka:)

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  7. Girls are mostly denied the freedom to unfurl their wings-happy are you that you managed to do it.

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  8. We are often molded through the various things that life tends to throw at us as we go on... But we do become better after the molding process is over!
    Well written Alka! Awesome post!

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  9. Such a nice composition. Well done.

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  10. beautiful! khrysos! ;)
    i guess i learnt a new word today :)

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  11. Awesome Alka.
    Congratulations for the book release :)

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  12. wonderful thoughts penned in a play of words:)

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