At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Friday, 29 June 2012
Ode of Joy
At the age of 11 or may be12 ,I loved reading Urdu Poet Nawab Mirza Khan Daag better known as Daag Dehlvi He was a self-acknowledged romantic poet (shayar} but contrary to the impression one gets from his poetry, he eschewed wine. Usage of common words and phrases was distinctive of his style. Though i am no where near him but this is an attempt influenced by his style.
On ode to joy ,
No I am not being cynical ,
But have become lyrical ,
Have become like old wine .
Now don't be surprised ,if I make you feel shy
Am now in a different world
A world that's spherical ,
A miracle
I don't care, as long as am twined
With joy of being in your arms
Am ,enticed.
Now ,blow some air
I feel like a flute
With that feel of your lips ,
When they touch mine.
No ,now don't turn ,
Just look into my eyes ,
My heart , my soul , my body ,
Every chord is yours ,
My breath now waits for yours
to feel mine .
Drenched ,intoxicated ,bathed
In dew that's yours and mine ,
My eyes though closed , can still see the hue
When I hear you murmur
"Cant get enough of you , where were you
while I looked for you , didn't you know
you are made for me ,you are mine
now come close , I want to hear you sigh "
I feel like Feni like old wine ,
Toast before you spill this wine ,
Slightly bitter ,at times dry,
But don't gulp ,go slow
like never before tried.
Am here , hold me tight .
copy right (c)alka narula
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aah, this is as intoxicating as..."feni"!!Are you in Goa..? Loved this poem....
ReplyDelete"But don't gulp ,go slow
like never before tried.
Am here , hold me tight..." --Exquisite!
Thanks for this treat:)
no panchalibolchi ,am not in Goa ..thanx fr liking :)
Deletean excellent attempt I'd say...Although I've never heard of Daag sahab(unlucky me)...but thanks for u made me Google him... :) :) :)
ReplyDeletewill surely have to spend time on some of his works...catchy one... :) :) :)
thanx cynosure :)
DeleteLoved it soooo much!cheers to feni and old wine!!
ReplyDeletethank you mmaria :)
DeleteI am sure even Daag sahib would have said awesome ...
ReplyDeleteBikram's
thank you bikram :)
DeleteI love every word of it... wow!
ReplyDeletei hear your name while each nd evry word i write ,its c miracle that you hav cum into my life !
DeleteNice, I loved the way you compared yourself with wine!
ReplyDeletethank you saru:)
Deleteआपकी कविता दिल छु गई अल्का जी
ReplyDeleteदाग दहेलवी मेरे पसंदीदा सायरों मे से है
"लुत्फ़ इश्क़ में पाए हैं कि जी जानता है
रंज भी इतने उठाए हैं कि जी जानता है
जो ज़माने के सितम हैं वो ज़माना जाने
तूने दिल इतने दुखाए हैं कि जी जानता है
तुम नहीं जानते अब तक ये तुम्हारे अंदाज़
वो मेरे दिल में समाए हैं कि जी जानता है
इन्हीं क़दमों ने तुम्हारे इन्हीं क़दमों की क़सम
ख़ाक में इतने मिलाए हैं कि जी जानता है"
thank u shashi :)
DeleteHmm....delicious....can we now say that "SHE MIRZA GHALIB" has arrived but with a english version ???
ReplyDeleteawwww u r tooo kind with yr words,thank u sooo mch :)
DeleteIntoxicating! Well written!
ReplyDeletethank u sooo mch :)
DeleteSome thing so intoxicating about Urdu..beautiful!
ReplyDeletethanx maitreyee :)
DeleteAlka you too are growing & glowing like old wine--so intoxicating.
ReplyDeletehahaha thank u indu :)
DeleteBeautiful! I don't usually promote a post unless I go through, and comment.
ReplyDeleteAs you are in Goa, you might have known another kind of FENI that is medicinal!
thank you .......nooooooo am in delhi and a tru delhiite :)
Delete...loved it Alka, could easily understand, taste and relish the very essence of this wine..err..old wine:) It's intoxicating indeed:)
ReplyDeletehahaha ;))))))))
Deletewow! your poems are far greater than my level of understanding. I feel like keep on reading them.
ReplyDeleteBtw, alka ji im new to blogging. very much interested in reading and writing. you have any tips for me?
oh wow thank u sooo much for ur kind words:)haha,no tips as such just write from your heart:)
DeleteAmazing Alka :) i would be referring you as AA... :)
ReplyDelete:)biiig smile...thank u mak
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