My springs my trots
Have become still
My will , my determination
Now hesitant ,stagger ,
Shake like comber
Vacillate like a breathless wave
Trying to reach the brink
My knees now in spasm
Cant race with blazing sun
Now my heart says
"Don't wait , let the torrid flames
Take control of your constitution
Your soul needs to be freed
For the reason ,
It can no more bear the perturbation ,
Face the ultimate
Render your frame
It has become stale
No point , straggle
For no reason
Now you must wane
Disappear ,
Neither you nor I
Belong here
We appertain
We all came from mist
Now disentangle yourself
From this maze
The vicious circle
The labyrinth "
copy right (c)alka narula
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Indeed it's a breathless wave trying to break you free from the shackles of mortality.
ReplyDeletehmmmm thanks prabhakar :)
Deletenicely paced. learned a new word, comber. thanks for writing.
ReplyDeletethanks subhorup , thta v sweet of u :)
Delete"... Now disentangle yourself/ From this maze ..." don't we go thro this situation some time or other. I had once written, "this fractured tangled threads.."
ReplyDeleteys u r ryt @archetypes :)
DeleteAlka, when I promote a post, I do read it, and make a point to comment, many don't. The PIC goes well with poem :-)
ReplyDeletethank u soooo mch :)
Delete..I couldn't decide whether to read this poem first or enjoy the wonderful picture.
ReplyDeleteFinally, both are stunning:) Thank you Alka:)
am glad u read the poetry ..else i wud hav been disappointed :)
Deletenicely written :)
ReplyDeletethank u pooja :)
Deletevery nice !
ReplyDeletethank u musay :)
DeleteAlka, This is beautiful---a literary piece!
ReplyDeleteAnybody would be stuck by these lines...
"Neither you nor I
Belong here
We appertain
We all came from mist
Now disentangle yourself
From this maze
The vicious circle
The labyrinth " aah!
thank u sooooo mch panchali :)
DeleteAfter reading this wonderful piece, I just realized a common pattern in all your poems....looks like each and every poem is written about the ONE, who wants to break free...with a hope..
ReplyDeleteys v true ..& thank u hemant :
Deletea rush of wave with your words thats connects a reader instantly ...gr8 going Alka
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
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