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Wednesday, 1 August 2012

lonely

Animated rain drops outside on tile floor




Alone  in a canyon , a ravine
Swept by a mysterious wind
am drowned ,
My tear drops
dont stop from rolling down .


You said " now you know me ,
you wont let go me ,
you will hold me ,
before I drown "


But slowly you disappeared like a whiff
of an over whelmed wind ,
Like musk of spring , that was there for
a season, now gone.


Now you only can elucidate ,
unfold ,unravel the riddle ,
how do I deal with the feeling
of being discarded like vendible ,
my loss of esthesia ,
my vision ,
my heart ,
the pain of drowning in dark .
When my screaming heart echos
you are gone .


copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit net animation.net

29 comments:

  1. ........ reminds me of "Please dont go !" great writing Alka !

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  2. Your words are always so strong and touchy..penned beautifully..

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  3. So much of pathos. Nice words again. Please right something with a happy ending. Indian movie goers like happy ending. :)

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  4. Very touching poem again, Alka. :)

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  5. really nice and touching and beautiful picture too:)

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  6. stop from rolling down... awesome Alka :)

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  7. nice poem Alka it comes straight from the heart

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