Alone in a canyon , a ravine
Swept by a mysterious wind
am drowned ,
My tear drops
dont stop from rolling down .
You said " now you know me ,
you wont let go me ,
you will hold me ,
before I drown "
But slowly you disappeared like a whiff
of an over whelmed wind ,
Like musk of spring , that was there for
a season, now gone.
Now you only can elucidate ,
unfold ,unravel the riddle ,
how do I deal with the feeling
of being discarded like vendible ,
my loss of esthesia ,
my vision ,
my heart ,
the pain of drowning in dark .
When my screaming heart echos
you are gone .
copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit net animation.net
........ reminds me of "Please dont go !" great writing Alka !
ReplyDeletethank you bharat :)
ReplyDeleteYour words are always so strong and touchy..penned beautifully..
ReplyDeletethank u ranita :)
DeleteLovely Alka!
ReplyDeletethanks jaish :)
DeleteTouching.
ReplyDeletethanx sushma
DeleteSo much of pathos. Nice words again. Please right something with a happy ending. Indian movie goers like happy ending. :)
ReplyDeletethanx sabyasachi...sure will try :)
DeleteVery touching poem again, Alka. :)
ReplyDeletethanx akshay :)
Deletelovely :)
ReplyDeletethanx saikat.
DeleteI hope this is pure fiction?
ReplyDeletehaha indu , time will tell .
Deletereally nice and touching and beautiful picture too:)
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
DeleteLovely poem Alka!
ReplyDeletethanx saru.
Deletestop from rolling down... awesome Alka :)
ReplyDeletethank u mak :)
Deletebeautiful lines, Alka :)
ReplyDeletethanx panchali :)
DeleteLovely writing Alka!
ReplyDeletethank u soo mch rahul .
DeleteOh so beautiful, Alka!
ReplyDeletethank u amit .
Deletenice poem Alka it comes straight from the heart
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