Once again few lines inspired by Daag Dehlvi ji , but in the form of lyrics
Your beautiful eyes, left me gape
Your beautiful smile , told me your name
Your beautiful hair , you left on my nape
Your lips made me wonder , if you would
ever say "you will be mine"
I could hear , what you were trying to say
I could feel your breath , though you left ...went away
Your beautiful hair , you left on my nape
Every time I look at them " my loneliness disappears
the feeling is so divine "
Look at me... one again
Let your smile speak for you
Let it say again
Let your lips feel my nape... once again
But this time don't leave your hair ,I must say
Cant resist you , you are like an old wine
Let me feel the depth in your eyes
Come close to me
Let me feel your body close to mine ,once again
when I hear you say
"You were made for me, you are mine "
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Hauntingly mesmerizing and endlessly poignant!
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thank you shashi :)
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Delete..Daag sahib inspires you and you do justify his kalaam, Alka:)
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DeleteLovely words as always overflowing with love. Keep on writing.
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