From the garden of paradise you ordered me " Travel "
In the melody of new spring , away from the venom ;
Speechless , learnt a new vernacular ,
Overwhelmed I travel !
The blue sea ,
The fathomless ocean ,
are witness to my journey without fear
Now when I learnt the secret , am atop fate ;
Since you ordered me "Travel"
My flowing tresses on top of my apparel
appear burgundy , at times coral
I flaunt my ravishing smile ,
that bears the secret behind the colours of my ravel ;
The spark in my eyes has grown wider,
it can topple the light coming from the seething rays ;
Now don't ask me no questions while I blossom ,
while I travel !
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The blue sea ,
ReplyDeleteThe fathomless ocean ,
are witness to my journey without fear
thank u brad :)
DeleteHi Alka you surely makes your readers travel along with you through your prose.....keep flaunting your ravishing smile:)
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
DeleteI am traveling to those places through your words!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Alka :)
thanx valli :)
Delete...take me along, Alka, and teach me on the way how to write such beautiful poetry:)
ReplyDeleteha ha sure we 'll go 2gether :)
Delete:))))
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Alka.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful..you made other to travel with you by those beautiful crafted words
ReplyDeletewhat an amazing piece of writing. Waiting to read more from you.
ReplyDeletebeautiful !!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Alka,
ReplyDeleteI'm getting enchained in these poetic words. Lovely lines.
But why was the order given, to travel?
The order has worked its charm, it seems. :)
Regards
Jay
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Wow! Love the way you used the words to describe each verse.. Gives a great picture!
ReplyDeleteSuperb Alka!! Loved it! Coral color! Wow!
ReplyDeleteNicely written! (http://techforworld.com)
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