lost in sweet pain , couldn't think beyond you.....and the aroma of love was powerful enough to have blown me out of my mind ......... in thoughts , in pain i was bathed in sweetness that was all around me ,my love.....
i cruised in love with a beautiful feeling ,was thinking only about you ,the blossom on trees added a new dimension to my love for you.... amused and in love ,i looked around for you as the aroma i knew was
coming from you my love.....
like a fool i never realised ,besides the blossom there was a moschidae(musk deer) too ,who confessed to me , "he was searching for me and followed the aroma and found me " i smiled but never told him the musk he followed i followed it too to find him ,my love !!
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Learned a new word, moschidae! Thanks, Alka!
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ReplyDeleteso sweet!!!
ReplyDeleteNice. Love not the fragrance, but the flower. Fragrances exist as long as flower does :)
ReplyDeletevery nicely penned
ReplyDeleteRarely do we realise that the olfactory senses play a huge role in attraction - you should read a book called Smell by Radhika Jha - captures the essence of a love story.
ReplyDelete:) The fragrance from your words in this page is filled with love... :) good one...
ReplyDeleteWonderful and sweet post
ReplyDeleteMay this sweetness stay forever
my pleasure subho:)and thank u too for ur comment:)
ReplyDeleteburhan thank u:)
elvira thank u so much once again:)i had been very tied up past week will be posting the chorus soon:)and thank u soo much for the contribution
apoyando very true:)
sujatha thank u soo much:)
gyanbaan i will definitely try it out thank u for the suggestion:)
thank u soooo much phoenix:)
nukta thank u:)
hmmm love makes us do all sort of things .. but then following the scent of the musk you found each other :)
ReplyDeletelovely poem
Bikram's
WOW! Great description of lovely love.
ReplyDeletewow beautifully written Alka...
ReplyDeletethank u so much bikram for ur consistent support:)
ReplyDeletethank u so much neeraj:)
thank u rahul:)
I wrote a song for her when I proposed her.. it was like "maine khoya hai sab tujhko apna bana ne ke liye, apna bana ke jaane dunga nahi.." this post reminded me of that forgotten song I used to hum then..
ReplyDeleteit seems like very nice song why dont u post the lyrics sumtime if its not too touchy for u..would love to go thru it sumtym:)its an honor that my post reminded u of ur own song:)thank u beyond
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