my life when you left had fallen apart,i tried not to fall but follow your path.... don't let me stop from reaching my destination my heart,as i can see a halo now !!
life without love is an empty vessel my heart ,it makes sound so loud that you don't want to hear..surrounded by emptiness but a mask of happiness i wear ........so don't let me stop from reaching my destination my heart, as i can see i am close to halo now !!
as i am reaching close to halo my heart,i hear the cloud burst and can see shooting stars.....all waiting for me and can hear the welcome sound ....so don't let me stop , as i can see the light closing in now , so please wait for me to reach the final destination and together we shall rest in peace ... all i can see is a halo now !!
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For the first few lines, I was a little confused, but at the end of the paragraph, I realized that you were writing about what you write best about, Alka, feelings of the heart. Nicely written lines, with a neat spin on the game, will be looking out for the following parts.
ReplyDeleteam sorry for having confused u subhorup:( but thank u soooo much for ur wrds and ur consistent support i will be posting the other part soon
ReplyDeleteyesss... arjun jab nishana lagat hai to use sirf fish ki aankh nazar aati hai ..
ReplyDeletekeep ur eyes on the target and GO FOR IT ..
no distractions ..
sorry my hindi is a bit weak :)
Bikram's
hahahaha never mind i understood ur hindi..well said bikram:)
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