when the sun shines ,you are not there but i feel you in every breath that i take.....every morning i hear you whisper in my ear"i will be back when you sleep and the life will start all over once again"......and i wonder when would life allow me to feel you when you are there.
every night you sleep with me with your arm around my waist....and i cant see you while you feel me when i sleep ....its your whispers that tell me of past night how you felt.....and i wonder when would life allow me to feel you when you are there.
can i plead ,that i want to see you once again....a wonderful feeling i want to experience once again, its not easy to live with just the presence of you that i feel , around me when the sun shines and every breath that i take....please allow me to feel you the way you feel me, when i sleep at night once again .
i told you, that i love you more than you think ...please allow me to feel the warmth when you hold me tight and feel your breath fly a few of my hair around my nape...can you hear me,when the sun shines, i want to hear your sound once again ,i want you to look into my eyes and tell me ," you love more than i think once again "
copy right (c)alka narula
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beautiful lines
ReplyDeletethank u rupert:)
ReplyDeleteSuperb!!
ReplyDeletehmm now that is a lovely feeling when someone looks in the eyes and tells us they love us :)
ReplyDeletelovely poem ..
Bikram's
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vineet thank u:)
ReplyDeletebikram thank u so much:)
chirag thank u:)
another fine write...very well penned...i loved the rhyming here...
ReplyDeletebut as a reader i felt the para graphical placement,does take away the free flow of a rhyme...
thank you for sharing
hey fallenpoet thank u..and thanks for the feedback
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