i picked up threads when i saw some hope .... .......i tried to move but crumbled before i could go , i gathered some strength when i saw you at the end of road.....my strides were slow and i lost you before i could open the door.
can you fetch some pollen spread on the leaves....can you gather some musk spread in the air for me....can you swelter for some more time in the heat for me , i am stuck in a flytrap struggling to free me .......i was trying to gather some nectar but am entangled , am piping like a bee....will be there in no time if you can wait for me.....i know i am at the extreme end but am trying to reach.... till then , gather some pollen and some musk for me .
life can misguide , it can be deceitful at times ....no i am not trying to preach but am trying to rhyme ....what i feel....we are two souls and now so close....don't let the wind and storm blow us apart....the only desire, now i have is to wake up in your arms .... now don't lose hope , just hold on to me... please don't let me go.
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oh, i love this..:) Thanks for sharing Alka..:) Blessed day!:)
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much for liking it , sagi:)
DeleteWonderful post to begin my day !
ReplyDelete--Dee..
thank you deepake ,you made my day :)
DeleteLovely! simply wonderful!!
ReplyDeletethank you soooooo much amit.
Deletenice... i felt i was flyin like the butterfly.. :)
ReplyDeleteso was i while writing it :)thank you sahi for your visit and kind words.
DeleteNice, yearning poetry. The 'pollen' and 'musk that you ask for are mere distractions you want to create for the other one from your situation. In truth, it is the company that you crave for.
ReplyDeleteyou got me abs right :)thank you sooo much for your visit and valuable comment.
DeleteThe article speaks so much.. Beautifully written :)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooooooooo much muktamanassu.
Deletebeautiful words ...
ReplyDeletethank you sangeeta.thank you soooooo much.
Deletehmmmm good poem i must say.
ReplyDeletealthough as usual i always have something ot say he he he Sorry about that ..
why should one be so much dependent on other .. If they want to let go then let them , set them free if they are yours they will come back otherwsie they never were ..
sad when partings happen ..
Bikram's
theres nothing to feel sorry about....infact you give me an opportunity to communicate my feelings....keep commenting ,i love it.
Delete"i know i am at the extreme end but am trying to reach." says it all... to express pain is lyk drawing a sketch in open sky... and you have done it so nicely...
ReplyDeletefirst time on the blog,..really nice..
nice and expressive :)
ReplyDeletethank you soooooo much elvira.
DeleteIt is a beautiful poem-expressing fine sentiments....but like bikram i too feel one who deserts me, does not deserve me--OR MY LONGINGS,or my pining.
ReplyDeleteyeah indu you r abs right in what you said...honestly i strongly believe never wait for a bus nor for a man :) its just that momentary emotions that i pour out :)
DeleteBeautiful expression of words....
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much viya
DeleteLucky is the one who is at the receiving end of this dialogue.
ReplyDeletehehe i am fortunate theres none else i wouldnt be waiting and writing here :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome one Alka jhi :).
ReplyDeleteFull of feelings.
Loved it to the core :).
<3 <3 <3
thank you soooo much for your visit and kind words princess poo ,
DeleteNice words
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much jj
Deletethanks for sharing such a beautiful poem !
ReplyDeleteit says a lot with a fluttering butterfly!!!
thank you sooooooo much rahul.
ReplyDeleteIts so cute Alka!! The fluttering of the butterfly in that pic had me staring at it longer than anything!! :)
ReplyDeletethank you jen :)
DeleteBeautifully expressed.... Touching!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot anish :)
Deleteoooops sorry anisha :0
DeleteHi from a fellow Jammu native. :)
ReplyDeletehi JJ....nice to know that you are from the same state and thank you for you visit.
ReplyDeleteAwesome!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much hanan ,you made my day :)
DeleteNot much of a Shayar, got lost in the second para :(, but absolutely related to the first and the last, so little said.... and so much meant.. Loved it..
ReplyDelete:):)you may not be a shayar but your comment did sound to me like shayari....rajesh thank you soooo much for your visit and liking it
DeleteSo deep and and so lovely!
ReplyDelete-Good piece of information.
Deletecheers banti and thanks for dropping by :)
Deletethank you soooo much neraj:)
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