you know I am trying hard to break free ....I am trying to leave my emotions and pain behind .....no point I see , why shouldn't I flee....no, I am not a coward but tired of trying to foresee my destiny.....please listen to me when I plead..... set me free..... please set me free .. .....
you could have thought before writing my destiny....singled out in this world , now I cant live.....give me one chance to make you realise my agony.....let me be with you and you will see.....the pain that I have gone through and you will feel....I am right when I plead set me free....please set me free....
I will surprise you with my pleads when we meet ......you wont be able to stop my tears nor they will recede....you will be left with no choice but to set me free.....oh please set me free.
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Hmmm this has something that makes me feel like I did think of a part of my life reflected in your words...it's amazing
ReplyDeletehmmmm , we all have something cocealed behind our smiles...something though we may not share but certainly is common....wait for dec21' 2012 :)
ReplyDeleteand do u feel free now? =)
ReplyDeletehmmmmmmmmm :)
Deletedeep feelings so beautifully penned...
ReplyDeletethank you amit ...thank you sooo much for your constant support.
Deleteso picturuistic and beautiful !
ReplyDeletethank you rahul....thank you soooo much.
DeleteBeautiful Alka..we all have our sorrows and it's so good to see someone taking it out in a creative way. Touched my heart:)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much for your kind words kajal.
Deleteso poetic lines, its almost like singing a emotional song or verse:)
ReplyDeletethank you for liking it and your consistent support elvira,
ReplyDeleteMeaningful composition Alka and as usual the pain in your poems touches ones heart.
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much engram for liking it...about the pain , i really dont know how good or bad i am at conveying my feelings, i just pen down what i truly feel :)
Deletehave you heard the song I want to breakfree :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem this one ..
Bikram's
thank you bikram...want to break free is one of my fav nos :)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much engram for liking it...about the pain , i really dont know how good or bad i am at conveying my feelings, i just pen down what i truly feel :)
ReplyDeleteWhat's with you and the adorable animations,Alka?!?!?!!! :) I so so love it.
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much jen , i am glad you liked it:)
Deletesweetly drafted cries... tats what an art is... hide ur sorrows behind ur words and feel free... (not easy) :)
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much bhargav :)thank you for your visit too.
Delete"give me one chance to make you realise my agony.....let me be with you and you will see..." these lines there caught my eyes for sometime. Kept reading 'em time and again... awesome... ;)
ReplyDeletewelcome back phoenix..eagery waiting for your post...thank you sooo much for liking this one :)
Deletehi,
DeleteYeah! Me too eager to line up the overflowing thoughts to streamline for each post. ;)
Nice work..an insightful one..
ReplyDeleteLove this ♥
thank you for appreciating hanan :)
DeleteThe past is gone. There's no point trying to control what you can't control. Only the present can be controlled!
ReplyDeleteyes matheikal bygones are bygones :)
DeleteVery Nicely Penned!!
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much vineet.
DeleteNice one...liked the last part best - the "left with no choice"
ReplyDeletethank you protik...
Deleteexactly how i feel right now ! beautiful depiction :)
ReplyDeletethank you maliny..
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