you cant run you cant leave...its time to hear all my pleas ....don't you see i am on my knees....you are the one who can free me .... from the pain this life has given me......feel my heart , hear my heart beat...all it says is change my destiny....or take me away, save me from this pain....all i want is break free....
i am still young , its long way to go.....rip open my heart ,and you will see...its hollowed by harsh spell of destiny ... struggling to reap so that i can breathe...
when you see the smile in my eyes...don't you mistake....its the pain i hide from the world , from their eyes....."O" my destiny.....why couldn't you spare me.....all i can say either bless me with a smile .....a smile that i fake all the time....or put me to sleep .
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like the way you have expressed these lines abt seeking precious attention frm ur love...this lovely conversation:)
ReplyDeletewell elvira , this one is my plea to god :)
DeleteJust my thoughts - i think u should link this post with ur previous post "Set me free" and vice versa ....both are in sync...
ReplyDeleteconvey intense emotions together....
yeah elvira,you r right..its actually extention of my feelings on the previous night when i wrote "set me free" would surely do that.
DeleteHi Alka,
ReplyDeleteThe Pain is the freedom one gets out of love.It makes you a person.As long as your heart guided you you were in bliss but as soon as your brain took over and showed you the truth the pain comes.But is the pain of knowledge and Truth which is the ultimate.Thank God for that
abs captainjohann...and thank you soo much for dropping in and your kind words
DeleteHmmm well sleeping is better then a fake smile ..
ReplyDeleteBUT this is not fake smile :) .. lovely poem you know its a pleasure reading such beautiful poems all the time
Bikram's
bikram how can you be so mean ya...you want me to sleep??then who is gonna write for you to read:(
Deletelol,thank you for your kind words,u made my day :)
Well written... :)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much hanan , its a pleasure to have you here.
Deletesimple yet so striking . . nice read alka :)
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much for your kind words maliny , you made my day.
DeleteIs everyone on Indiblogger a poet...:)
ReplyDeletehere are my lines......:(
You can go and you can leave...
I bet u will never missed by me...
And sometimes when your phone doesn't ring , please do think it's me..it's a cost cutting time not a plea...
it's lessen my bill which then riches me...
On now your leaving I feel so light
I see myself a future all bright...
he he...hope it comes true &thank you sooo much for dropping by.
DeleteNobody saves anybody except oneself!
ReplyDeletewell said matheikal...and thank you soooooo much for dropping by.
Deletethank you sooooo much" computer service in chennai "
ReplyDeletevery well written.
ReplyDeletelovely. like the conv...
ReplyDeleteNice thoughts, and so well put in simple yet beautiful manner, like an unpretentious rivulet flowing down the mountain. joining the followers.
ReplyDeleteout of words..
ReplyDeletejust loved it...
bless you for writing such a masterpiece Alka..
Break Free..an amazing way to confess love Alka!! So good to fall in love over and over again with the same person right!! :)
ReplyDeleteI fake smiles all the time. It's a sickly-sweet sort of pain.
ReplyDeleteYou have encapsulated the wish for whole humanity.
ReplyDeleteAmazing thoughts!
Nice one, i actually tried reading it out like a song..and it rhymes really well. someone with real music sense..could make a foot tapping number.
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