In ocean of thoughts....... wide spread my fins i tried to swim in search of true love........in ocean of thoughts ...... my mind on spin i tried to win some love for my heart...overwhelmed i thought .... this time i'll win , i climbed the hill but fell from the top.....i screamed aloud in dark....but echo of my screams whispered to me , you are lonely sweetheart....... i am not sane i feel , its time to relieve this soul thats trying to free before it turns into sieve with repeated down falls......i have failed for ever i feel , its time to relieve , grieving this heart before it breaks down to hard....someone out there , if you hear my heart scream....have mercy on me , please relieve my soul from the hurt i receive .. i promise i'll.never ever complain , why did you do that to me.....i beseech this night...i hope you hear me this time ...and relieve me of pain....may be next time when i am here ....i may not ask you to take me away !!
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I'm on a Roll....This time I feel my luck could change. Kill me....kill me again...with love.
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Pull me out of this wreck...'cus I'm your super hero...standing on the edge.
IT'S GONNBA BE A GLORIOUS DAY!!!!
......Thom York
It is necessary to let go yesterday, to live today and anticipate tomorrow. Let go...
ReplyDeleteVery deep and painful emotions. :(
ReplyDeleteHart hitting words, strong expressions. The red background, just seems to suit perfect for the latest post.
ReplyDeleteThis post of your touched my heart Alka. Very nice poem !!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....very beautiful.
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cheers,
Kajal @ http://purplechronicle.blogspot.com/
sometimes when i read your poems . they feel like its story of my life ..
ReplyDeletebeautiful lifes .. love can be very bad tooooo
Bikram's
Yeah Bikram ,the greed for love is too bad on top of tht broken hearts :(.....thank you kajal for your valuable comment as well as your visit...thank you soooooo much Engram and Vivoma.....yes Akshay :( he he thank you for the comment.....yes ,you are very right Beyond, move on and pour it out here :) thanks for your comment,mean a lot to me.
ReplyDeleteStrong emotions and amazing flow + it rhymes perfectly. I really enjoyed reading it!!
ReplyDeletethank you della:)
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ReplyDeleteOMG.. that was brilliant. Your choice of words was perfect and they conveyed a meaning so profound in a beautiful manner. :)
ReplyDeletethank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much raj:)really thank u:)
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