I tried so hard not to express how i felt when i dedicate my songs ......my songs that i wrote when you were away and were gone .....frenzied my heart , not a trace on my face of anxious my heart .
I tried so hard to read out aloud , the songs that i wrote but before i could dedicate my songs to you....i heard a whistle of fast approaching storm.....a storm that wiped away my smile that i hide behind my eyes.
An alarm that blew my heart in small flakes .....the flakes that went flying around with your smile ...the smile on your face that i saw , had an essence that i knew, was not mine.
You broke my heart,you tore me apart....you were gone to stay away, with some one in your heart....all this while i wrote all my songs for the day, when we meet again and dedicate them to you .
The strange game that life played , i froze like ice felt my body being pierced with spikes.....when i saw the shade behind you had a colour that wasn't mine.
I gathered all flakes and left from there with a smile on my face.....i left no trace for you to erase the pain that i felt in frenzied my heart that was now recovering from the shock, that you are now gone .
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Wonderful post Alka! :) I love it, so touching..:)Keep sharing us more Alka! God bless you..:)
ReplyDelete"I gathered all flakes and left from there with a smile on my face.....i left no trace for you to erase the pain that i felt in frenzied my heart that was now recovering from the shock, that you are now gone " ... heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteThis s very deep, emotional and so revealing as well. It's beautiful.
ReplyDeleteEmotional one...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines, very touching ..
ReplyDeletethese were beautiful.. just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLife does play some strange games ...
ReplyDeletelovely poem
Bikram's
Very touching..you have a great blog.
ReplyDeleteHello Alka.
ReplyDeleteMy heart aches when I read your poems. They are filled with so much emotion & penned straight from your heart.
A touching write.
Beautifully expressed.
Thanks for sharing.
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Alka that was deep and really touching. You do write from your heart. Congratulation on winning the award.
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Those words were straight from the heart , Alka!Moving...
ReplyDeletelovely, heart-felt
ReplyDeleteNice one. Heart touching
ReplyDeleterahul,sujatha and sri raj thank you soooooooo much:)
ReplyDeletei tried so hard but no so far..in the end it doesn't even matter !!!
ReplyDeletefrom the song with the same name by Linkin Park
rahul
Very deeply touching. I can identify with the pain.
ReplyDeletethank you punamjr !
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