baby dont go ...you know you are hurting me... twisted like a rope, we were together through thick and thin.....
you know you were my hope...but somehow you decided to move away from me.. tell me how do i cope...when you are not there with me...you promised , we shall together reach the shore........ but how could you not sail with me...
you don't seem to know.....the pain i go through, when i think of the moments you spent with me...but now i decided ,i am gonna go...its not worth it...the pain is unbearable for me....
now let the destiny take control...i believe i should let go the one i love ... and.if my love is true,i am sure ....you are gonna come back to me....
the law of nature you know, don't try to control the loved ones and let them go ... they do come back and i strongly believe in it....copy right(c)alkanarula
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A very simple and pretty poem based on one thing that is for sure....letting go to see if it comes back, and it's truly yours.
ReplyDeleteyeah miss lego,set free and those who love come back to you.
Deleteu could write songs u know! this was one beautiful poem!
ReplyDeletethank you raphael, honestly i would actually love to but need a break ;)
DeleteOne more beautiful poem...if they dont come back they are not worth it.
ReplyDeleteyes indu abs...and thank you sooo much for liking it.
DeleteLyrical :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful :)
thank youu serendipity..thank you sooo nuch for liking it.
DeleteWay to Go Alka....wonderful poem:)
ReplyDeletehi elvira, thank you sooo much.infact i thought i would write to you,i am unable to post comments on your site,c if you can rectify.thanks
Deletehmmm...is it ??? coz i got other fellow bloggers comments properly....if this is the prob....how to rectify
Deletei really dont know the prob , let me try again nd shall get back to u.
Deletei really dont know the prob elvira , let me try again nd shall get back to u :)
Deletehmmmm i tried again dey r not goin..there is sum problem on my end there are quite a few blogs am unable to comment on..and its very anoying,,,really dunno what to do..
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DeleteThey never come back if you actually let 'em go. They come back when you give them the space they need. Other than that, every single word is so true. :) I love it... :)
ReplyDeletei totally agree with you phoenix , but sometimes you want to believe in delusions ;)
DeleteI couldn't agree with Raphael more... you need to write songs and get the other poems published..:)
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much kajal.
DeleteThat is so true!! I second Kajal who seconded Raphael!! :) You are really so good :) Love it. :)
ReplyDeletethank you Jen...i really wonder about my abilities at times...i really am at loss of words.
DeleteYou know, there's almost a Tagorian touch in your lines.
ReplyDeletematheikal, if i am not mistaken tagorian(with a small t) is stupid , plz correct me if i am wrong :)
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