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Thursday, 1 March 2012

when you need me


sometimes i feel , i should have been a little astute....and things would have worked for me...when i gave my heart to thee... i was sure you will harbour it from storms in the sea ....
but you didn't wait nor let me speak... your prerogative in life was thee...its not only me..you too suffer, when you realise i have ceased and cant be seen...butyour pride is larger than life it seems....
life has been harsh you know what i mean ..  let go your conceit and follow what i preach,and you will see how wonderful life can be........i am sure you can read my heart when i speak...few petals you can gather and come to me.......and i am there for life when you need me.
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25 comments:

  1. Akshay Kumar G1 March 2012 at 17:30

    You are so prolific and brilliant. Its a privilege to read your beautiful poems Alka. :)

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    1. Unknown1 March 2012 at 17:34

      thank you soooo much akshay, honestly i really dont knw how good or bad i am ...i just write what comes in my mind.thank you soooo much for your consistent support

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  2. r_Phoenix1 March 2012 at 18:38

    wow! super... :)

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    1. Unknown1 March 2012 at 23:43

      thank you phoenix...i am glad you r back , its nice to have you around .

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    2. r_Phoenix2 March 2012 at 02:11

      :-P my pleasure to read your posts Alka... :)

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  3. Menachery3 March 2012 at 15:13

    This is one beautiful poem, the pain and depth of emotions have been expressed in a very subtle yet strongly. If the entire poem was in a Verse format.. it would have given it more of an appearance .. for a first time read.. but nevertheless, its a wonderful read

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    1. Unknown4 March 2012 at 00:29

      thank you soo much for visit and your valuable comment Menachery

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  4. Shamsud Ahmed3 March 2012 at 18:10

    beautiful use of imagery. fantastic write. thanks for sharing

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    1. Unknown4 March 2012 at 00:27

      thank you sooo much for your kind words Shamsud.

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  5. Dee........3 March 2012 at 20:09

    Beautiful and gives a feel..
    as always alka :D

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  6. Kajal4 March 2012 at 12:04

    super stuff.. you are such a romantic and I love it:)))
    Always a pleasure to come back here. You never let me down.

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    1. Unknown4 March 2012 at 15:34

      Mmmmmmmmm romantic with no romance kajal,thank you for your consistent support ;)

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  7. CYNOSURE4 March 2012 at 15:15

    sweet and simple...loved the last line... :)

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  8. Unknown4 March 2012 at 15:29

    thank you cynosure :)

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  9. Seema4 March 2012 at 19:41

    short,sweet and simple.....I loved it

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  10. Jen..The Butterfly Effect4 March 2012 at 21:18

    As usual,it is really so beautiful! I loved those lines about picking petals and getting back to you! WOW :) Just super wow Alka!! :)

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    1. Unknown4 March 2012 at 22:57

      thank you soooo much fr liking it jen.hmmmmm honestly jen it doesnt happen in real life ;)..

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  11. ra5 March 2012 at 09:08

    you are at your best when it comes to express emotions love and pain all together !

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  12. Neha5 March 2012 at 09:19

    Beautiful words :) :)

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  13. Arnie5 March 2012 at 09:43

    Your poems touch the heart being equally real at times.To be there for someone when they need us, is the best way to let them know that we love them

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