i fell in love ...but life , like you said " i am afraid , its not in your fate ".... before the spring could break , i lost my love .....with a broken heart , i gaze at the ocean but it seems to have no cure for my pain.....i gaze at the sky in search of some alleviate for my pain...and it says " darling , i cant change your fate"
each and every fragment of my heart now wails " give me some love "....life you have to hear me out ....don't denude me , i am in deep pain..... .....you can not turn back on me or walk away and leave me suffering when my heart is slaughtered once again.....
copy right (c)alkanarulait may sound like i have lost my mind,but i don't care.....life you will have to write my fate,once again ......no matter you may have to fight with my destiny but don't leave me burning in this pain.
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am sure your words will touch the hearts of the one who wrote your destiny... :-P
ReplyDeletethank you phoenix...hope i hope i do touch their heart :)
DeleteAMEN to that and I am sure LIFE will work a a good Life for you sooon :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem
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thank you soooo much Bikram ...hmmmm i hope it does.
Deletetouchy and awesome....
ReplyDeletethank you sooo much abhishek for liking it.
ReplyDeleteAlka you write so so soooo well... Love coming here:)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much kajal
DeleteLovely words flow from your pen, Alka
ReplyDeleteFate is a power that we do have to acknowledge. Hope u will read my little post on fate at
ReplyDeletehttp://jerlyt.blogspot.in/2009/05/fate.html
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thank you for dropping by jerly..sure will go through your link.
DeleteBeautiful words :).
ReplyDeleteSad, but somehow feels true.
Very well penned down Alka Jhi :).
I know for sure that your FATE will change :).
Even if it didn't listen to you before, it has to now. At least for these beautiful words :).
Hope you have a Wonderful life Alka jhi :)
thank you soooo much for your kind words princess poo ...and wish a wonderful life to you too :)
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