on top of the world with my imagination i fly ....my only apprehension will you be my valentine this time.....its time for us to be together and all i seek nothing but your love for one night , just one night .
on top of the world with my imagination i fly.....do you want me to be your valentine....and paint the canvas that has been all white and i seek some colour of your love tonight , just for one night.
my love,if i am your imagination then please...don't stop from being by my side for one night....and don't let me feel lonely tonight,not tonight.
my heart is canvas that needs, some hue...that has been denied for some time ....but now i feel can be embroidered with your imagination ....if you tried this time , just try this time.
my love if you painted my heart this time,i am sure i wont stop from flying till next valentine ....though you may leave after tonight but be my valentine,valentine tonight !
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so lovely, Alka..:) Happy Valentine! Hope you're having a great valentine day!
ReplyDeletetahnk you saggi and same to you:)
Deletewell written :) alka ..n Happy valentines day !! Enjoy
ReplyDeleteThank you sheril and same to u :)
Delete:) Happy V-Day Alka
ReplyDeletesame to u sawan :)
DeleteHave a great day ...
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thank you and same to you Bikram :)
Deleteblend of emotions in each verse.....Happy Valentine's Day:)
ReplyDeleteThank you elvira and same to you :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a beautiful idea: of a plain canvas and painting it with the colour of love.
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's Day, Alka
You painted emotions so vividly and beautifully. Touching and soulful. :)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooooooooo much :)
Deletelovely
ReplyDeletehappy valentine
thank you chirag...hope you had a gr8 V Day
DeleteAlka you work with words so well ... the line where you say don't let me be lonely ... that's all one needs from their loved ones... the best part is you write just that little place called heart ..
ReplyDeletehappy valentines ...
thanks a lot sangeeta ....would like to also add "words are all i hav to take your heart away" :):)
Deleteooooops would also like to add...
DeleteYou are doing such a great job alka god bless ...
Deletethank you so much sangeeta.
DeleteAww.The craving is well potrayed.Love it!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words jen :)
DeleteBeautiful expression of craving Alka! Hope you had a wonderful V- Day!
ReplyDeleteThank you rahul , thank you sooooo much ..hope you had a wonderful V-Day.
DeleteYou just wrote a song i suppose.Gosh! Beautifully written. While reading it i never realized that i eventually started humming it.
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Nice read. Keep posting :)
Thank you saikat for your visit and your valuable comment.
Deletelet ur valentine stay with u 4ever and give u all the joy and love of this world very well written happy valentine DAy :)
ReplyDelete:)thank you saikat,and a v happy valentined day to you too.
Deletesuperb!! passionate and emotional write.. good pen...very well done..
ReplyDeletethank you sooooooo much The Fallen Poet
ReplyDeleteNice one. Truly refreshing !
ReplyDelete-Good piece of information.
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