i don't want to hear you say that you didn't listen to your heart beat.....i would rather say....its too late for you to come along ...as i moved away when you broke my heart
i was listening to my heart beat , when i heard you say "you stole my heart away ".... overflown with emotions i got carried away ...i fell in love
when i stopped listening to my heart beat and heard what my mind had to say... i left in pain with a heart that ached
i was in love when i heard you say " you stole my heart away".... you are a fool who thought "i was there for some kind of gain "
when you weigh my love with your past affairs.....you made a mistake and let me go away .........i was there to give my heart away
you didn't hear the way my heart beat nor the words so strong .......its too late for you too come along, i have moved away with a heart that aches and don't hear ,no more,what my heart says.
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I was the fool...who was there for some gain...Only love to gain.
ReplyDeleteYes...did weigh your love...which was only human...'cus you made me believe that I was human.
I was wrong...fooled into believing that I could also be human.
Feel like an insect...stuck, smashed on the windshield of life.
Ahhh....the Pain..in my heart...in my soul...Pain....my only true love and constant companion.
Be still...my beating heart...
Here I stand...Denuded again...like a tree in winter...examined, poked, probed, experimented.
ReplyDeleteWaiting an endless wait...for the spring of love...an endless hopeless wait.
Hope I must...
Wait...Can I...
I hear the distant sound...of the grim axe of the reaper...is it my turn to be hacked down?
I turn my head skywards...waiting for the sunshine of love...to shine her soft light on my naked soul.
An endless wait...for the spring of love to cover my naked body....with all the colors of love...
Wait I must...
wait I will...
I still hope..
against all hope...
wait I will...
wait I must...
for love's eternal warm embrace....
you have become a sulking ground...not willing to move on....and if i was standing in your place,i would grab her if she came my way...place her in my heart that did not beat for long...crown her and not turn around to look at my past thats now byegone ...and look into her eyes that emit huge light that you need not bare and wait for the sun shine... you got to realise,the eyes can be decptive so many times...recognise the right wave when it comes your way.. share whats left with you with some grace rather than indulge in self pity all the time and you are the only one who has suffered all through life.
Deletesorry i must correct the last lines...rather than indulge in self pity all the time that you are the only one who suffered all thru the life.
Deletesorry one more mistake before you can correct me BYGONE NOT BYEGONE :)
DeleteOk, I am going to reply to this with a poetry of my own-
ReplyDeleteI gave you chances,
I dropped you hints.
You looked through me,
from pink glass tints.
You ran me over,
and killed my thirst.
I was radiant and jolly,
like an atom bomb burst.
I feigned happiness,
which is hardest to feign.
You were the nursing bottle,
and I had to wean.
I cried, got over you,
moved on, bought a life.
Tired, spent my soul,
through this endless strife.
well penned, beautiful lines..Abhyudaya
ReplyDeleteLaugh I must...
ReplyDeleteCry I will..
Laugh at those who laugh at me
Laugh with those who laugh with me
Cry I will...Alone
I pity those who pity me
I pity those who say I am pity incarnate
Have no fears
Have no daemons
Have no pity
Need no pity
Today I embrace myself
In a loving embrace
Today I cleanse myself
Today I bathe myself
In my tears
Tears of Joy
Tears of Happiness
Tears of Sorrow
Tears of Love
Be Still my Beating Heart
Be Still
Beautiful poetic lines ...
ReplyDeleteLife is Just a Life
My Clicks
thank you soooooooooo much for liking it neeraj :)
DeleteClick away...
ReplyDeleteMy Friend...
As the clock Ticks...
Life is just a Lie...
I know it...by it's Tricks
Be Still my Beating Heart
smile while your heart cries is a secret of life...
ReplyDeletebegin to believe in silence its strength by your side...
move on with life in hope the future will be bright....
never say give up ...what will be what will be is the chorus you need to rhyme ...all i wanna say is "survival of fittest" is mantra i thought i should remind....
Hmmm...
ReplyDeleteFrom Darkness commeth the Light
Let me be Bathed in this Light
The Light of Life
Cannot go alone in this darkness
Need you to show me the light
Wow..I can hear those heartbeats... So touching..!!
ReplyDeleteExtremely well written... ♥ ♥ ♥
~Pangs of separation is always unbearable~
thank you soooo much Hanan :)
DeleteMoving. Great flow.
ReplyDeletethank you soooooo much coffeeandchess
Deletethis poem like a song that make me immersed in other world :)
ReplyDeletethank you soo much aulawi for your visit and kind words.
Deletewhen i stopped listening to my heart beat and heard what my mind had to say... i left in pain with a heart that ached
ReplyDeleteAWESOME ALKA :) KUDOS
you didn't hear the way my heart beat nor the words so strong
DeleteYOUR PHRASES ARE ALL FILLED WITH LOVE ALKA
thank you readitt for your constant support.
Deletethank you sooooo much dee for liking it.
DeleteWah Alka kitna sundar likha hai...
ReplyDeleteshukriya :) ...thank you amitaag for liking it.
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