life is a desert ,still i smile...i sea an oasis ,i try to fly....but the evil eye leaves me behind....i feel so naked without an attire ......but i share my thoughts....i empty my heart ,pour out pain.....life you are ruthless still i dont complain ......i admire the way you scripted my destiny....its your empire ,i am a slave .... a little granule,you can fondle me or crush my wings.....i am at your mercy.....pain in my heart,struggling .....i continue my journey , blinded by my desires..in hope some day the vision of divine will change my life....and you will embrace this downtrodden.....at times i feel i want to give up.....but you hold my rein..... i try to fight but i fail .. , i realise i cant oppose your game...so i continue with a smile embedded with pain....in hope some day you will free me from this domain.
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Hello Alka,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations :D!
I just nominated you for "The Versatile Blogger Award". Please accept it and for details please refer below link :
http://saikatscribble.blogspot.in/2012/02/again-versatile.html
Keep blogging and keep posting.
Regards
Saikat
"Oh Saikat"thats v sweet of you...i feel honoured to receive it from you,will certainly go through the link.thank you
Deletenice work. =) but wouldn't it be better with some shape and form too. =)
ReplyDeletestill loved it!
yeah Raphael you r right...but can i share a secret with you..i am a v clumsy girl :) but will try to improve ..thank you for your comment and suggestion.
Deletenice poem it feels while reading thanks joined yours firend connect network pls reciprocate with mine
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thanks cheers
thank you for joining and your comment...will certainly reciprocate.
Deletesorry taht was for you mohan.
DeleteVery beautiful lines..Enjoyed reading...:-)
ReplyDeletethank you soooo much "a homemaker&#;s utopia...you made my day :)
DeleteAs usual it is always a pleasure to be here. Love it. I hope all these get in a book soon:)
ReplyDeleteyeah kajal v soon...thank you sooo much for ever encouraging words.
Deletein hope some day you will free me from this domain.
ReplyDelete... hope thats so easy even for the almighty to do so.. :)
god has given very awesome subject "PAIN" to write... dun you think so... we decorate it so nicely and yet we complain ... :) :) :) ... smile it out... (will feel free, i can assure any one on that)..
kahin guftagu hoti hai..
kahin justaju hoti hai...
khud se bichadke .... fir... khud se hi sikayat hoti hai...
WHY WE ALL DO THAT... I WONDER
very well said bhargav :) well grass is always greener on other side ,what say :)thank you soooo much for your visit .
Deletevery beautifully presented as always alka . . soul stirring, if i myt put it metaphorically :)
ReplyDeletethank you maliny :)
DeleteYou always inspire me with your words Alka. :)
ReplyDeletehey akshay...i am honoured..thank you sooo much.
DeleteIt is just WOW Alka! :)
ReplyDeleteEspecially the lines-. {a little granule,you can fondle me or crush my wings....} hold so true right! Very well said!! :)
thank you jen.
Deletekeep your face towards the sun,& the shadows will fall behind.Freedom from pain does come-at it's own pace.
ReplyDeletehmmmmm yes indu ,well said...
Deletenaiceeeeeeeeeeee enjoyed reading it :)
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thats unusual bikram...i expect u to say something always :)
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