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Friday, 9 March 2012

eternity

                                     
                                       
       
                                               like I said
                                  I am no one to write my destiny
                                             I am a pebble
                                           that you have cast
                                           I am your creation
                                            I am at your feet
                                      confer some love on me
                                            I am your child
                            inadvertently I may have  gone wrong
                                       with no knowledge
                                            no wisdom
                                 but now I feel, I should seek
                                 an asylum,a refuge in thee
                          I am forthright,candid while  I speak
                                 wrap me in your vast arms
                                 I need no love,no materials
                                        need only a cover
                            from glitter and glaze of this world
                                    lead me I am your slave
                            I wait for you to sprawl your arms
                                show me the way to eternity
                                        I wait for you
                                           my lord

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26 comments:

  1. Anil Sawan9 March 2012 at 13:33

    woo, i havnt read a prayer for long! felt good :)

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    1. Unknown9 March 2012 at 14:44

      i knew it sawan ...so decided to write one for you LOL:) Now jokes apart, am glad you felt good.

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  2. Elvira Lobo(Elli)9 March 2012 at 18:18

    awwwww...luv this:)

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  3. chitra9 March 2012 at 21:02

    'i wait for u my lord..",,indeed i wait to...
    beautiful.
    http://chitranavada.blogspot.com

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    1. Unknown10 March 2012 at 13:57

      thank you for your visit and kind words chitra

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  4. Unknown10 March 2012 at 13:55

    i saw it deepak,and commented also will definitely go through the entire post and answer all your 11 questions.

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  5. AmitAag10 March 2012 at 16:32

    A prayer so deep and more meaningful since it is in silence...very nice Alka!

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  6. Dee........10 March 2012 at 18:26

    Beautiful work alka :D

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  7. Kajal10 March 2012 at 21:47

    beautiful as always.. whats your inspiration Alka?

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    1. Unknown10 March 2012 at 23:08

      thank you sooo much kajal... no inspiration as such , its my state of mind , events in day to day life but has some connection with me.

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    2. Kajal11 March 2012 at 11:57

      Beautiful Alka.. wish I could play with words.

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    3. Unknown24 July 2012 at 23:48

      thank u kajal

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  8. Vetirmagal10 March 2012 at 23:12

    Beautiful, Dont we all feel it one time or other, but can't say it , in such beautiful words!

    Enjoyed it!

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    1. Unknown11 March 2012 at 09:47

      thank you soooooo much for making my day ,vetrimagal

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  9. Unknown10 March 2012 at 23:37

    wow , such a soulful prayer , rght frm a blissful heart ... :)

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  10. Saru Singhal11 March 2012 at 09:04

    It's the best poem I have read on your blog. Loved the beginning and the way you weaved the thoughts together...:)

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    1. Unknown11 March 2012 at 09:45

      thank you saru ..slowly slowly i am improving :)

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  11. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 20:27

    alka ji very nice creation !!

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  12. Jen..The Butterfly Effect14 March 2012 at 02:18

    Long time since I caught up with you Alka!! :) This poem sounds so spiritually blissful!! Love it so much! Couldn't agree more with Saru!!! Those are my very thoughts!!! :) Best poem I should say!! :)

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  13. Deepak Doddamani24 July 2012 at 23:50

    Excellent !! What a flow of words and emotions. Indeed quite Spiritual

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