In ruins I laugh , I smile when you say........ "your defeat is eminent,you have failed" my stars you say "are eclipsed and I should accept my fate"..I turn my face with a mischief in my eyes ,I gallop like a stallion and ignore the pain
Your stern eyes you know are fake....your laughter ,and my disasters are marvels of destiny....I Will bear the pain ,I know I have to sustain though i may be bereft of life
With a smile on my face , here's my invite....if you could entice my fate , I will be your slave...you can captivate me for life..the only bargain I can suggest my life......it would be great if you can free me from anguish this life.copy right(c)alka narula
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Brave soul.. Loved the last para..
ReplyDeletethank you kajal..i second you o that camment.
DeleteHey nicely written...Liked it a lot
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much for your visit and kind words rahul.
Deletefantastic !!!!
ReplyDelete@sadheteenakshar thank you soooo much for your kind words
DeleteAlka..Alka...Alka...aah! the concluding lines came on me as a jolt!
ReplyDeleteExcellent I must say!
hey amit ,honestly your words are encouraging for me,thank you.
Deletehmmm dont we all want that freedom from anguishes of life
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yes bikram most of us do...the only diff i pour it out here that rest may not do (i mean on blogger LoL ;)
DeleteVery sad lines!!
ReplyDeleteHmmmmmm ! thank you for your visit ramakant.
DeleteWOW! Speechless.
ReplyDeletehmmmm ? thank you sooo much for your sweet words !
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Love it when you stay mischevious despite being told you haven't succeeded... :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful vivid expression of your inner freedom !!
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