when i need you love , i close my eyes and think of you.....the emotions go high and i can see you.....engraved in my heart ....... and i can feel you hold me in your arms ....
overwhelmed in love when i look around for you.....i lose you my heart but your aroma i feel still floats in the air.
love me my heart....you are the only treasure i ever sought..... i cherish every moment spent in your arms .....and am glad that we met.
don't you say , i am in love with virtual love but hear me when i say ... feel my heart beat and ask why does it crave for love ....its just that i chose not to bare my heart ..so don't conclude what you see with your bare eyes or on a hearsay .copyright (c)alkanarula
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oh this is a gem Alka....i read it like its a love song:)
ReplyDeletethank you elvira...hmmm thats v sweet of you.
ReplyDeleteLove love love
ReplyDeleteand yes fair enough how can someone judge when we dont bare it all ..
well written
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getting hurt is the biggest scare i have in life bikram, prefer suffering silently rather than exposing milder side of myself :)
DeleteGreat one Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank you sooooooo much for liking it viya :)
ReplyDeletewhat style of writing is this??it reads in soothing flow and somehow it gets mixed with the lovely texture of your blog...feels like its always 14 feb on your blog...
ReplyDeletejust to make sure my first line is not anyway misleading you as any criticism...i loved reading it...i was just confused if it was a poem or a poetic prose..
ReplyDeleteHey Shubham ..you are welcome to give your opinion and comment,i dont mind criticism it only helps me improve upon my writings..well i dont try to write poetry all the time,at times its lyrics,at times poetic prose..i am a layman but love to write so pour out my thoughts as they come.
Deletewas just wondering...if you call yourself layman, i would feel like layanimal..:) your post was really good..was just curious coz long time back i read a book which was prose but very poetically...it's a very sweet style the way you wrote...kudos
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