Deserted ,
alone ,
encircled by darkness ,
frozen in the chill of this cold night !
Too scared ,
to even go close to source of light ,
no wish to open my sunken eyes !
Desire to see someone ,
the drive to do something ,
the desire to be some one ,
the asperations , the ambitions
remain frozen and foiled !
Alone
no one to abet no one to guide ,
my anguish my plight ,
who would understand
the mystery ,
dont wish to share
but hide !
Drained
worn out
desire to lie ,
the will to remain alive now died !
Alone
like a falling droplet from leaf ,
like a single leaf on a withered tree,
I lie
frozen in darkness and chill of this night !
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Very deep emotions, beautifully captured again. :) But there is always hope, so there is always light even if we are encircled in darkness.
ReplyDeletethank you akshay !
DeleteLovely..:-)
ReplyDeletethank you @utopia
DeleteWow...that's awesome, Alka...so intense!!
ReplyDeletethank you amit !
DeleteBeautiful feelings of desertion, Alka. You should have linked to the original poem too. I'd love to read it as well. And did you check out 'Main tainu samjhawaan'? Do read my reply to your comment. :)
ReplyDeletesure will link the original...'Main tainu samjhawaan' no i havnt will do it nw :)
Deletehi Punamjr have published the link to original poem too ;)
DeleteTruly lonesome, Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank you rahul !
DeleteAgain the words you use , and I like it cause I can understand them and I know the desertion the deciet
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem
Bikram's
thnx bikram !
DeleteBeautiful poem
ReplyDeleteमै अकेला रह नहीं पाता तेरे ख्याल आते है
अंधेरे कमरों में उम्मीद के जुगुनू टिमटिमाते है
रौशनी चुभने लगी है आँखों में कोई भुझादे ये दिये
मेरे छुने से लोग पत्थर हो जाते है
भावनाए नहीं बचती
संवेदनाए जम जाती है
मेरे छुने से लोग पत्थर हो जाते है
मै अभिशाप होने लगा हू
तुम वरदान ही अच्छी
मै अकेला रह नहीं पाता तेरे ख्याल आते है
abs amazing lines shahsi !
DeleteSo lonesome & poignant!You express these feelings very well.
ReplyDeleteNow share some happy thoughts Alka.
thank u soooo much indu...l surely do so:)
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ReplyDeleteAnd I was the one behind this inspiration :)
ReplyDeleteI AM HONORED!
Unbelievable work! High Five!!! :))
haha yes u wer:)hi five friend:)
DeleteThere is something mystical... is it the words or is it the way they reflect when you write them ! Liked It! Cheers!
ReplyDeleteawwwwww thank u vijay:)thank u soooooooo much
DeleteAmazing sense of loneliness
ReplyDeletethank u rajesh:)
DeleteBeautiful lines....
ReplyDeletethank u
Deletelovely post Alka...
ReplyDeletethank u rahul:)
Deletebeautifully written poem...
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