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I flutter !
My wings torn in this struggle !
Still I face with grace !
Wont retrieve from where I stand ,
nor retrieve from my place !
Am here till I attain
and
obtain what I deserve to gain !
You have been unfair !
Amazingly you love to play crafty games ,
but somewhere you did fail ,
when you thought you would be victorious
and
could be triumph
could celebrate ,
when I fall and when I fail !
Am your creation , like you am too obdurate ,
will make you wait for the day ,
when you can celebrate !
Will surprise you with my flutter !
Will make sure that you do fail ,
and
refrain from troubling your neonate !
My wings torn in this struggle ,
still you haven't been able to erase ,
the smile that I adorn on my face !
My flutter in this endeavour ,
is due to bring some nice color ,
that's away from your envision
nor you can anticipate !
Am sure to get away with my faith !
Am sure to change my fate !!
Ccopy uighu(c)alka narula
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i saw a hint of revenge through out and just loved the positive feel towards the end!
ReplyDeletethank you sawan !
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely, Alka.. you have the power to change the course of your destiny. Just believe. :) Loved the feel of the poem. It screams, "Never say die!".
ReplyDeletethank u sooooooo much punam...u r right v all have the power to change r destiny...n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days
Deleteabsolute brilliance..simply beautiful..
ReplyDelete:D thank u shri
DeleteSure,sure,sure--
ReplyDeleteYou shall surely attain,
Whatever you want to gain!
n i hope ur wrds come true:D
Deletenice poem
ReplyDeleteyou will get what you want
thanku chirag for the comment and d wishes...n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days
DeleteIt had everything in it...a sweet revenge...and a positive ending...beautiful composition... :)
ReplyDeletethank u :D n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days
Deletea theme of positivism , indeed!
ReplyDeletebeautifully scribbled
thank u jasmeet:)
DeleteMesmerizing As Usual... Who Are You? I stand Mesmerized!
ReplyDelete:-)
awwwww thank u for d mesmerising comment n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days
DeleteThe power of change is so alluring!
ReplyDeletevery true rahul
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