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Saturday, 21 April 2012

faith






                                                 I flutter !
                                 My wings  torn in this struggle !
                                        Still  I face with grace !
                                     Wont retrieve from where I stand ,
                                       nor retrieve from my place !
                                           Am here till I attain
                                                    and
                                 obtain what I deserve to gain !
                                       You have been unfair !
                                Amazingly you love to play crafty games ,
                                       but  somewhere you did fail ,
                           when you thought you would be victorious
                                                    and
                                            could be triumph
                                             could celebrate ,
                                        when I fall  and when I fail  !
                          Am your creation , like you am too obdurate ,
                                   will make you wait for the day ,
                                     when you can celebrate !
                                 Will surprise you with my flutter !
                                  Will make sure  that you do fail ,
                                                    and
                                refrain from troubling your neonate !
                                    My wings torn in this struggle ,
                               still you haven't been able to erase ,
                                 the smile that I adorn on my face !
                                   My flutter in this endeavour ,
                                is due to bring some nice color ,
                                that's away from your envision
                                      nor you can anticipate !
                                Am sure to get away with my faith !
                                    Am sure to change my fate !!

Ccopy uighu(c)alka narula
photo credit photobucket






                   
           

18 comments:

  1. i saw a hint of revenge through out and just loved the positive feel towards the end!

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  2. Absolutely, Alka.. you have the power to change the course of your destiny. Just believe. :) Loved the feel of the poem. It screams, "Never say die!".

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    1. thank u sooooooo much punam...u r right v all have the power to change r destiny...n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  3. absolute brilliance..simply beautiful..

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  4. Sure,sure,sure--
    You shall surely attain,
    Whatever you want to gain!

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  5. nice poem
    you will get what you want

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    1. thanku chirag for the comment and d wishes...n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  6. It had everything in it...a sweet revenge...and a positive ending...beautiful composition... :)

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    1. thank u :D n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  7. a theme of positivism , indeed!
    beautifully scribbled

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  8. Mesmerizing As Usual... Who Are You? I stand Mesmerized!
    :-)

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    1. awwwww thank u for d mesmerising comment n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  9. The power of change is so alluring!

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