Who are you ?
I stand mesmerized...
Cant erase your thoughts you are on my mind !
Like a shadow ,in my dreams.......
You follow,cant escape,cant evade.....
Not even for a while !
Your eyes ,that smile, that feel ,
Mesmerized I stand , in awe ,
I wait for you to hold me tight !
Did I hear " you have come from paradise"
Can I ask ?
Where were you all this while ?
My thoughts,my soul ,cant break free from your control ....
Now
Don't ask" Can you wait for a while "
You set a spark , that has now turned me wild !
Mesmerised I stand ,
Wait for you to hold my hand ,
Make me believe ,if you can ,
You are not a dream ,
Your eyes ,
You and the aura around you
My sighs are all true ,
And
You have come from a different world ,from The Paradise !
You have come to take me to your world
Right now , right away , this night
In your thoughts, I stand mesmerised and turned so wild !
copyright (c)alka narula
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mesmerized by the poem !
ReplyDeletethank u ankit
DeleteI love the way , the stranger has been described, especially the endless wait and the passion that he brings about ...
ReplyDeletethank u mena:)
DeleteAlka, this one is really very nice. I just love its structure...:)
ReplyDeletethank u sooooo much saru n n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days
DeleteMesmerized!
ReplyDelete:))))))))))))
DeleteI'm mesmerized too, Alka, by this poem!
ReplyDelete;))))
DeleteLovely poem!!
ReplyDeletethanks ramakant :)
DeleteHi Alka
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!
thanx jaish :)
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