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Sunday, 22 April 2012

my friend

                    These lines are inspired by the communication I had with
                     someone who was  curious to know about my struggle in
                     life.. here is the answer I gave him though in few words.....      
                                     
                             I smiled at him when he asked me , my name !
                           I looked away when he asked me "why am in pain "
                                  How could I say cant liquefy my pain !
                                   If I gave away the secret ,my friend
                                If I shared my pain with you ,my friend
                        From where will I gain the strength to fight my friend !
                                All I can say is I accumulate my pain
                               My pain becomes a source of energy
                                        it gives me all the strength !
                            Difficult but you must learn to control your emotions
                              don't give away , don't share your pain
                                 that's your secret energy, my friend  !
                           That's my strange way to thrive in this world !
                       The world that may pretend that's your best friend !
                                         If  u shared your pain,
                   they may hear but the next moment they may not be there !
                                   Its a strange world it doesn't care ,
                                   but I don't blame it on the world !
                                        The game has changed ,
                         this place has become a race so no offence !
                       Rise and fall are a part of life ,so don't care at all !
                                                Look up ,
                   don't thrive on past it will pull you back and you will fall !
                                   The drive to fight comes from within you ,
                              so don't wait for some one to hold your hand !
                                Each one of us is made different
                                                    and
                                        has different beliefs !
                               If you want success follow my foot steps
                             Share your joy is the best way to success ,
                      hide the bleak side don't open up until you succeed ,
                                        once you have made it
                                      spread the word around
                                 the secret of your success , my friend !

copyright (c)alkanarula
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24 comments:

  1. Yes i have seen that you follow this policy...you must be having sound reasons for doing so ;but hidden wounds fester.

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    1. :)you guessd it right indu...and i agree hidden wounds fester

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  2. I learned a lesson here. thank you for shining the torch my friend.

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    1. awwwwww:)thank u so much leo..u dunno how much this means to me

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  3. Yeah...one needs to hide pain till it is time...and yes, pain does make us so much wiser and richer...it helps us grow. But dang, I still crave for the happiness of success! Thanks Alka for the post!

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    1. hmmmmm well i guess we all crave for the happiness of success:)n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up

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  4. Experience speaking here, Alka:)

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  5. let me say THATS the way to do it , for i have realised and seen that people dont understand the pain, they try to help i know but its better to keep it in and fight it alone ..

    some take advantage of that pain toooo WELL said

    Bikram's

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    1. exactly this is the way to do it:)am glad u liked it..and ppl who try to tk advantage of pain r soooooooooo frkn dsgstng

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  6. ah...that is indeed a very strong message. Thank you Alka.

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    1. nooooo thank u mak for liking it and for understandng it,,n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up

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  7. Such beautiful words have been entwined to create this masterpiece. Why a masterpece, because you have so simply, managed to touch a chod in everyones heart, i read thi spoem over and over again, and couldnt help but relate to it. lovely

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    1. awwww i think this is one of the best comments i have ever recieved..thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much mena... and n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up

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  8. amazing poem, ms.narula! though May I request for a different theme? It too so long to load :( NO? Okay! Let me try adapting myself to this theme! :)

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    1. thank u jhonka...suggestions r always welcome:) theme as in the background????n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  9. what a sermon Alka maam ...very true indeed "share ur joy, bt nt pain until u succeed " coz experience show d world really dnt care xcept for itself thnk you fr such a lovely post.


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    1. thankkkk u soooooooooooooooooo much saikat:)n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  10. Thank you Alka for this valuable lesson. :)

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    1. :)am glad u like it akshay:)and hope ur road to recoveru is shaping well and u r all better now...n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  11. Have Nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award, as i love reading it..!! http://vineetchhajer.wordpress.com/2012/05/01/versatile-blogger-award/

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    1. thankkkkkkkkkkkk u soooooo much vineet for this honor....n m really sorry for the late response was very tied up past few days

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  12. so true and well written and answered Alka !

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