can see some bright stars in the sky;
like a vine, feeble in the air
I held on to a tree of life ,
An embrace of fresh air
made my thoughts crystal clear
and am not lying ,
like a bird am ready to fly in the air ,
the feeling is so divine !
The sound of distant drums I hear
getting louder, that makes me smile ,
I crossed the horizon
that divides two worlds ,
one is yours and one is mine !
Though
deep down I fear
you may not forget that request of mine ,
just one brief sleep in your arms I seek,
that too for a while !
The pain I may forget when I am there
away from lust of life
with you , in an eternal nest
in thy world I wish to be with you for some time !
Hope you know I am ready to fly to your world
and am not lying ,
its time for you to smile at me
don't let me down this time !
Please ensure
this time my stay is longer than last time ,
my heart and soul are overwhelmed and excited
the energy seems to have grown twice ,
after having seen the divine light !
copyright (c)alka narula
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beautiful and intense thoughts...loved the way it was carried through out...great composition... :)
ReplyDeletethank you @cynosure !
DeleteVery initimate, i must say. Very fantastic verses Alka.
ReplyDeletethank you bhargav !
DeleteIt's extremely poetic....beautiful use of words
ReplyDeletethank you ritesh !
Deletedivine light it is.. by means of words!! :)
ReplyDeleteit cerainly is vineet...
DeleteNice writing , Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank you rahul
Delete" away from lust of life
ReplyDeletewith you , in an eternal nest "
da day we will understand the gravity of this phrase,.. we wll be content and will never find any in tears...
so beautifulllll ....... js awesome, somethings come strght from heart, and am sure this one is from that inner sanctum..
thank you bhargav !
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem....I am in awe of everybody who can make words sound so mellifluous in the form of poetry.
ReplyDeletefrom start to end....I just went on reading and feeling the mighty beauty of your poem...so very well written... proud to know a good poet as good as you
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful words
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