On a chariot
with two wings
on my way
where the angels live
hold your breath
for awhile,while
I speed up towards the halo
that I can see ;
The clouds now
seem to be ready
to shower some silver dust
on none other than me
,look into my eyes
have you seen
me so happybefore in my life ;
Like a bee
now I feel
among the flowers
that look like tiny stars
up in the sky
,I wish you could watch
me hop like a butterfly
around the silver halo up in here;
Can you hear
the silver bells sing
"girl now forget every thing ,
tell your world
to look forthe bright star
shining up in the sky
and that's me "
.
copytighy(c)alka narula
photo credit phoyo bucket
I find it insightful to read your poetry which seems to be pouring out emotions from your heart.Keep up the flow, you are touching some others heart too.
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DeleteWhat a beautiful poem....expressing your heart...mind and soul!!!it was heart rending and touched the chords of my soul!!!bravo!love so much your blogs!inspiring and so true!
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DeleteWow, you have a gift from god, i swear. i could never come up with something like that! Beautiful :-)
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Deleteyour poem rymes so much with a old hindi song Tere Bin Suney Nayan hamare sung by mohamad rafi and lata. its just that your poem has touched the hihgest cord of that immortal song. Kudos to you for such excellence
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