Oh mother I was a seedling you nurtured me till I grew up ,
though I was seedling but I could hear you scream on my way to this world .
Your pain I coulnt feel but I know it was just you and you who could have borne that pain for your loved one
.You are the one and only one who could feed me the nectar of love that poured when I was born .
Though I am old enough now and have moved on but surprisingly , in pain or in moment of joy the only word I scream is "Oh Maa , Oh meri Maa"
copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit artilem art gallery
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true MAA is the most beautiful word we can come across , d pain d sacrifice everything dat a mother endures for her child is d highest of all deeds performed by nyone..c iz d greatest , nd dats d reason wenevr we r in problem we always turn to her for help :) :D HAPPY MOthers day , lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteyes saikat...thank you and same to you.
DeleteHi Alka
ReplyDeleteI had a C Section and so I really am not very sure how bad labor pain is :) I heard that my mom had a horrible time when I was born...Happy Mother;s Day....Lovely post!
thank you jaish ..same to you
Deleteअल्का जी आप ने मन की भावनाओ को सादगी और सुंदरता से बयाँ किया है
ReplyDeleteशब्द समय सब कुछ कम पड़जाता है एक दिन काफी नहीं है हर स्वास में है माँ
माँ की याद आसू खुशी क्या बाते कितने अहसास ले आती है
कहते है ना
पुत कुपुत भले होजाए माता कुमाता नै होती
thank you shashi.
DeleteVery true, no matter ho0w big the distance ,we always call out to her.
ReplyDeletetrue indu.
Deletebeautiful lines Alka....
ReplyDeletethank you seema.
DeleteIts amazing the strength a mother posesses. Beautiful penning this. Just a feedback, break your poem into lines, presentation of this poem will make it even more beautiful
ReplyDelete,hav already acted upon your suggestion ,thank you sooo much.
DeleteVery strong and perfect. A dedication worth every word Alka.
ReplyDeletethank you mak.
Deleteeven the word beautiful fails to justify the beauty of what you have written.
ReplyDeletethank you sooo much neeraj for your kind words
Deletethey do say Mavaan thandiyaan chavaan..
ReplyDeletema bina na koi laad ladaunda
rondiyaan nu na chup karwaunda
ma hai rab da roop
oh duniya waaliyo
Bikram's
beautiful ..
ReplyDeletetrue, kuch bhi hota hai .. acha ya bura .. sabse pehle maa ka naam aata hai !