At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Monday, 11 June 2012
Bling Bling
When I heard you say , Now Drift
dumbfounded ,speechless before I could think ;
you said " Fly " astonished and surprised ,
before I could turn to look into your eyes
and ask " Do you really mean it ,
you comply or you mean to play with me "
you said " Live your life"numb , I was stunned
before I could believe you were being candied ;
you pushed me towards the tide that had begun to now recede ,
riding on the tide I hit the shore , that seemed like paradise to me ;
that night in the paradise , when I lay with him
under the sky ,didn't care about what the world would think
he held me tight , I thought it is a dream
his caressed me all the while he lay beside me ;
a moment of high ,I let go my soul free
under the sky ,when the stars went bling bling
the moon was shy , could see it hide behind the trees ;
wind whispered "Let's see you smile , when your dream is getting accomplished"
now when you see me smile "you know the secret I believe"
copy right(c)alka narula
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these lines have left me too truly speechless and dumbfounded. they speak of some very deep emotions. wow. like. wow. happy for you and your secret.
ReplyDeletethank you sooo much subhorup
ReplyDelete...your transparency won't let you keep any secrets:) All the best!
ReplyDelete(lovely poem, Alka:))
haha thank u amit :)
DeleteLovely poem. Your words made me speechless. Keep writing . . .
ReplyDeleteAshwini
neat verse, one that had to be written by a woman...
ReplyDeletethank u bhavana :)
Delete:) I love every word of it!
ReplyDeletehmmmmm :)thank u :)
DeleteA charming poem of hope, rejuvenation and life:
ReplyDeleteFinally everything turns into a beautiful smile!!!!!
Oh, loved this, Alka...
thank u soooooo much:)
Deletebeautifully written. consider me your fan henceforth. :)
ReplyDeletekeep writing. :)
thank u mani :)
DeleteWow!!!! You are simply outstanding in poetry....:)
ReplyDeletethank u ashish :)
Deletewoooow .. so very beautiful Alka .. quite an imagery poem !
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
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