Like I said "my breath now smells of orchids,
my smile now hides the mystery that I cant decrypt;
you have come into my life when my tribulation was on peak,
my life had become a torcano that is never relieved ;
your majestic strides in my life extinguished the fire
that never seemed to become extinct !
You have come into my life like a rainbow ,
the hues now I can see ,
my color less eyes have begun to sparkle
is evident from the colors now that they reveal !
I have begun to blossom
the color that you see on my cheeks
is mere paragon of the bliss , you see !
My dissonance with life now has changed into an agreement
that you will stay in my life till the day there's life on earth
or
any corner of the universe that no one may have seen !
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Sweet love.. is it?
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is mere paragon of the bliss , you see !----Intense n sensual piece:) So nicely worded!!
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ReplyDeleteSuperb play of words. Enjoyed it . . .
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thank you ashwani :)
Deletemagical words ya:)
ReplyDeletethank you elli ;)
DeleteWow! the effusive joy is infectious in your writing!!
ReplyDeletethank u magiceye :)
DeleteBeautifully said alka !
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Delete...the sensuousness in your poem reminds me of my favorite John Keats sometimes, Alka:)
ReplyDeleteawwwww thank you soooo much amit :)
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ReplyDeletethank u yamini nd look forward to c u again :)
DeleteAha ! Beautiful ! :)
ReplyDeletethank you puru :)
DeleteLovely poem! :)
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DeleteNice poem. Well written.
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Deleteb'ful !!!!
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DeleteWell written, Alka
ReplyDeleteTHANK U @vagabond mind :)
DeleteVery beautiful poem depicting the feelings of how one feels when one falls in love. What a time that is! A small request: Love yourself too..
ReplyDeletethank u bemonuyaware :)
DeleteLots of love & lots of tenderness in your poems--but remember, an orchid was an orchid even when none was taking in it's beauty & fragrance!
ReplyDeleteys indu , and thanks a lot :)
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thank u indu :)
DeleteLove this stanza - You have come into my life like a rainbow , the hues now I can see , my color less eyes have begun to sparkle
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