One more attempt inspired by Daag Dehlvi
(1835-1905) This piece describes the beauty
of a man and a woman relationship.
Fill me up
Relieve me ,
Am sultry without heat
Sweltering in flames
My hues have become flamboyant
The colours are rare
The reflection
of lust is no more concealed
I seethe , in pain
I need no marijuana
No draft no squirt
Your green eyes
Your famous smile
Are reason enough
to engulf me in sweet pain
Watch my lethargic strides
Look deep into my eyes
Watch the greed on my face
Feel the desire
Am aroused am in pain
My guise my veil
Are on fire
The sensation I cant bear
I read your eyes
I know , you feel the same
Now don't you hesitate
Drop my masquerade
Fill me up with bliss
Lets sway in enigma
Don't think don't vacillate
Feel my breath
Before its too late
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Lovely poem Alka..:-)
ReplyDeletethanks @A homemaker :)
Deletesensuous..beautifully sensual!
ReplyDeletethank u amit :)
Deleteஅருமையான கவிதை. உரைநடையும் அருமை. wonderful lines. i like it.
ReplyDeletethank u sekar :)
ReplyDeleteYou write so well :)
ReplyDeletethank you gazala :)
Deletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteA magic weave of words, Alka!
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
DeleteSuperb Alka! I am often at a loss to express what I feel for a good verse.
ReplyDeletethank u rachna :)
DeleteVery intense Alka. Erotic!
ReplyDeletethank u mak :)
DeleteSensual yes, interesting with that picture.
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thanx avy :)
DeleteBeautiful, sensuous, interesting !!
ReplyDeleteThe picture goes very well with the theme!
keep writing :) :)
thank u sonia :)
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ReplyDeletenic lines miss.. hat off.. sahib^_^
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