At times its difficult to express one's inner most feelings but when poured out the words form poetry .Welcome to my thoughts that lie buried deep in my heart# and I decided to share with you all. #Words that come from a special place deep within my soul. Some of it may be right on time for what is going on in your life right at this very minute now.....
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Sunday, 8 July 2012
midnight blue
On that night , when the stars were indigo
And the sky was turquoise
When the orb of night,
Heard every word you phrased,
While the life compassed and gauged,
Each and every expression on your face,
When the orbit of heavenly celestial,
Came to halt to say,
"Its your time ,go ahead move on, don't wail ,
He is right , he waits for your strides
in his life , have faith in his eyes, he wont change"
Though you said ,"I should smile ,
I shouldn't care, about the other world"
I was Amazed ,
My mind still at pace,
Curiosity still prevails,
About the indigo light ,
About the turquoise sky ,
Cant stop my mind from whisper ,
Chit chat with my soul ,
"What makes you say,
That your plight has disappeared over night ,
You are set free,
You can sail,
How can you say you heard them right ,
And Its not a hear say","
Now its for you and you
To make me believe
You are still there,
Say it over and over again,
I am your life , you yearn for me,
Like the way you did ,on that indigo night,
When the moon appeared in a different mood,
It changed its colour to midnight blue,
When the life smiled ,
And whispered to Moon ,
"Let her sail" !
copy right (c)alka narula
photo credit photobucket
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That's is awesome, I sang the whole poem like a song.
ReplyDeleteSo melodious!
thank u rupert
DeleteOh Alka,this is so beautiful :)Moon has a shade of blue tonight...and that says it all...and it lives on. :))Lovely...
ReplyDeletethank you panchali :)
DeleteI love the imagery and use of colours, so vivid!
ReplyDeletethank u purple mist :)
DeleteThats is beautiful...love lives are so complicated--all the emotions one goes through:( at least it makes good poetry!
ReplyDeletev true & thanx bhavana
DeleteThis one had a serene effect over me :)
ReplyDeletethanx neha :)
DeleteLovely poem. The image is very cool.
ReplyDeletethanx shalu :)
DeleteLovely poetry, Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank you rahul
Delete...let her sail...oh Alka, it's heavenly...let her sail..!
ReplyDeletethank u sooo mch amit :)
DeleteYour expressions,feelings,imagery & imagination-all make a heady mixture--love on & write on !
ReplyDeletethanx indu :)
DeleteThe Midnight Blues, Lovely Poem :)
ReplyDeletethank u samyyyr :)
DeleteI know very little about poetry Alka, But absolutely loved the way this one sounds...Simply Superb!
ReplyDeletethank you jaish:)
DeleteSo many tales of indigo nights, all as beautiful as the other one... liked your poem... keeping walking!!!!
ReplyDeletethank you amit :)
DeleteIt is beautiful... wow!
ReplyDeletethank u :))))))
DeleteWoww!! Every single detail from poem to the photo was simply remarkable,, youve surely been blessed tyou much!!
ReplyDeletethank u jedika :)
DeleteI love this! So beautiful. Where did you find that picture on photobucket? Its so pretty!
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