Stay away ,if you care
I told you
Not again
Like unreasonable ,inexorable wave
Don't follow me everywhere
Now once again
I can feel you
You are back again
Now stay
You are the one and only one
Who's been there
My confederate
My accomplice ,my friend
In times
In my desolation
Has seen my hiding place
You are not unaware of my solitude
And my aches
I see none
But you are the one
Who I know for no selfish reason
Are there
Can stay forever
Need no elucidation
Without reason you are here
Once again ,"O My pain"
copy right(c)alka narula
photo credit sadacanaa.com
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..loved these lines the most:
ReplyDelete'But you are the one
Who I know for no selfish reason'
and:
'Without reason you are here
Once again ,"O My pain"
..A beautiful tribute to buddy pain!
thank u amit :)
DeleteYou are such a good writer. Loved every word of it.
ReplyDeletethank u shalu :)
Deletelearning to revel in pain.....
ReplyDeletebeautifully versed
thank u magiceye :)
Deleteबेहतरीन पेशकश
ReplyDeletethank u shashi :)
DeleteWow Alka...You rock !
ReplyDeletethank u jaish :)
DeleteThose who stay without reason are the ones who truly care... Well written!
ReplyDeletetrue ...thank u danny :)
Deletepain and solitude... if only there was a remedy. Awesome poetry :)
ReplyDeletethank u neha :)
DeleteHeart felt lines again:only ,i hope this pain is an illusion.
ReplyDeletethank u Indu , ys ths time its illusionary :)
DeleteAwesome lines once again..:-)
ReplyDeletethank u @homemaker :)
DeleteA tribute to pain. Brilliantly etched. Sometimes, when one is lonely, that's probably the one consolation, that the pain would never leave you!
ReplyDeletethank u deepa :)
DeleteAlak, your lines instantly connect the heart..niiice though a painful one this time:((
ReplyDeleteFrom which site do you get your pics ? They are just perfect to weave in poetry! Lovely blog..
thank u panchali :)
DeleteYou are the best at expressing emotions such as pain and loneliness. Loved it Alka. :)
ReplyDeletethank u akshay :)
DeleteHmmm....this is deep and well sculpted. It sounds harsh...but I enjoyed reading the pain !
ReplyDeletethank u vaishali :)
DeleteVery nice post Alka. You have beautifully personified Pain and given it human qualities. :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteSo, how do you embrace the pain in your life? Does its presence bother you now or you have included into your life?
thank you jay,i guess pain comes as a part of life,i have lernt to embrace it:)
DeleteThis one was my beggening in favorites of your beautiful gift
ReplyDeletethank you jedika:)
DeleteYou have portrayed the confused emotions really well. Good one !
ReplyDeletethank you yogesh:)
DeleteI need not comment anything I guess. Your poems really come "deep from the heart". A very good one alka :)
ReplyDeletethank you mani :)
Deletenice and heart touching....
ReplyDeletegood one alka.
anu
thank you anu :)
Deleteit was kind of puzzle and i was trying to figure out what you are talking about till i read the last line...beautifully written Alka...
ReplyDeletethank you rahul
Deleteyour words make me dwell in your thoughts:)
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
DeleteHmm...Good one ...deep thinking and thought provoking !!
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