I have come far away , away from raven
an ebullient storm ,
Few miles away ,
Away from stardust , have become buoyant
Lighter than smokey cloud .
I followed a vibrant ray that lead me to the world of stars
Though am blind ,blinded by the storm ,
Yet can see a doorway ,that leads to mysterious world
that Neith is said to have spun .
Now you, did I hear you whisper " Life has just begun "
The hue on your face is brighter than one could have thought.
Like an Eros, like Morpheus hold me in thy arms
I need No Helios , No Aether , No Oceanus
But just one breath in love
copy right (c)alka narula
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Just awesome as ever mam
ReplyDeletethank you vinisha :)
DeleteAlka...
ReplyDeleteThe deep lake undisturbed. Holding on to the calm..with the wind trying to shatter the peace within..so beautiful :)
panchali u read me so well :)
DeleteI love your presentation and your poems too.
ReplyDeletebut your space is alluring :)
thanx ghazala:)
DeleteHey Alka! where have you been...missed your lovely poems:)
ReplyDeleteAnyways, you've made up for your absence through this awesome piece:)
thanx amit , hav been busy wd work nd tryin to complete my book ASAP :)
Delete:) beautiful once again
ReplyDeleteBikram's
thank you bikram :)
DeleteYou are so talented.
ReplyDeletethank you shalu :)
DeleteLovely poem as always. "I followed a vibrant ray, the lead me to....."
ReplyDeleteEvery body needs a vibrant ray. :)
thank you sabasachi :)
Deleteloved it. your poems always open up new worlds to me. thank you so much for sharing.
ReplyDeletethank you subhorup :)
Deletewonderful poem:)
ReplyDeletethank you sajeev:)
Deleteyour words are so absorbing.......
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
DeleteJust awesome!! "Like an Eros, like Morpheus hold me in thy arms
ReplyDeleteI need No Helios , No Aether , No Oceanus
But just one breath in love"-loved these concluding lines..
thank you ranita :)
Deletewow .. beautifully written Alka
ReplyDeletethank you rahul :)
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