my sensuality , my aura
my overwhelming sound
the twinkling eyes , that mischievous smile
few fractions ,went flying
tossed away from life
cold , frozen on pyre
my body made no sound
Strewn in million pieces
an atom , smaller than splinter
shredded within the ground
left among slumgullion
in a play ground
away from a place
called my home town ;
My passion and my dreams
my accomplishments , what I achieved
my pains , my longings
smothered ,when I lay
with no tears , no feelings
when the rose on my cheeks was all gone ;
Though I don't wish to be there
but if ever you think to reincarnate
and ask me to go back to the world
the world where I never belonged
I vow , will never fray ,nor crave
will be subtle in my ways
a secret I learnt in your world
where I have no frowns
but I pray allow me to remember
the secret ways , that I might forget
while u raise another life in a new place
that I shall call my dwelling ground
my home town .
copy right (C) alka narula
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Great! Loved it,Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank u amit:)
DeleteBrilliant way to capture the scenario Alka. Very well expressed
ReplyDeletethank u mak :)
DeleteAnother beautiful one.
ReplyDeletethank u sabyasachi:)
Deleteawesomeeeeeee is the word :) :)
ReplyDeletethank u vinisha :)
DeleteB.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L!! Very neatly expressed..
ReplyDeleteT.H.A.N.K.U itswhereiscribble :)
DeleteAwesome! Well selected words :)
ReplyDeletethank u vinesh :)
Deleteand home is where the heart is :)
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v true bikram :)
DeleteNice one Alka
ReplyDeletethank u vikram :)
Deletewonderful.
ReplyDeletethank you gunjan :)
DeleteNice poem, Alka
ReplyDeletethank you satish :)
DeleteYour poem resonates in the hearts of those who are torn away from their home town-it is very painful.Superb thoughts expressed so well.
ReplyDeletethank you indu :)
DeleteUnforgettable home...indeed :) Beautiful lines.., Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank u panchali :)
Deleteone moment i felt as if i was reading about myself...very well written
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
DeleteHI,
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