
This piece of poetry is inspired by the lines given above
He heard my rhapsody , heard my Iliad
He said " Hold me, unlax , now you are in my arms"
I showed him the trounce marks of destiny on my heart
He felt them and said " They will disappear, next time when you glance at your heart "
I told him , " I will crumble,if you are not there, you are gone "
He swore and said " I may not be here but when you need me, I am there, you will find me around "
He left to look out for stars , Disappeared in the crowd ,
I don't see him , nor feel him , don't think he is there he is around .
But I hear him say " I am here , I am still there I am around "
How do I tell him , I need him , am incomplete without him . I need his arms ,
How do I convey ,What are you looking for d'ont lose me while you look for the stars
Don't bereft me of love I found . Hold me , before you lose me in the crowd.
copy right (c)alka narula
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Nice poem
ReplyDeletelove this poem...The poem has unusually long lines at times but that has added to the beauty
ReplyDeletebut we all do that dont we ignore the ones who care for us and run after those who dont bother ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Very Nice Alka.
ReplyDeleteyou are only one in the crowd.
ReplyDelete...lovely:)
ReplyDeleteNice synthesis of prose and poetry Alka:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful :)
ReplyDelete" I will crumble,if you are not there, you are gone " ...good lines ,I liked it
ReplyDeleteRavi
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So romantic, made me blue :)
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