A sensual piece Once Again !
You heard me right
Its not you but
the sparkle in your eyes
behind the fire
that ignited me once again !
Surprise me
Embellish my mane
with jasmine
Bathe my naked body
with splashes of
"Moon Shine in the Garden "
Moist my lips
with burgundy flowers
With you am in a world
that I can not define
The feel of your breaths is so divine
I forgot
Don't ask my name again !
My galloping strides
The flutter of my wings
Are here to say
Quench my thirst
with your breath
that is now mine
Caress my eyes
Whisper my name with every breath you take
Your body your soul is mine
Say that , once again !
* Moon Shine in the Garden -jasmine , known for its intoxicating property)
copy right (c) alka narula
photo credit photobucket.com
Don't ask my name again
ReplyDeletebrilliant piece of poetry .. alka
now now that indeed is sensual one .. :) I enjoyed
ReplyDeletesorry i have not been regular here for some time
Bikram's
makes me wonder on the roads of sensuality .. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry Alka....really sensual...
ReplyDeleteHmm...truly intoxicating words Alka.
ReplyDelete"Don't ask my name again." why's that so?
Keep posting :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
...gasping for more!!!!!!
ReplyDelete:)))) amit
DeleteWonderful...........
ReplyDeletethank u debopam :)
DeleteA truly sensual one, Alka:)
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
DeleteLyrically sensual!! Beautiful!!
ReplyDeletethank u magiceye :)
Deletevery subtle yet powerful..
ReplyDeletethank u @desi traveler :)
Deletewow...dreamy, sensual...beautiful...
ReplyDeletethank u panchali :)
DeleteLovely lines. Very true to the title of the poem.
ReplyDeletehank u matheikal :)
DeleteBrilliant, this was :)
ReplyDeletethank u akanksha :)
DeleteA sea of pulsating emotions,wonderfully expressed!
ReplyDeletethank u uppal :)
DeleteWow! Every line brought out a striking visual.Beautiful composition.I love the flow.
ReplyDeleteMy world, my thoughts, my musings...
aww...sweet and sensual!
ReplyDeleteever so soft,and romantic and so vivid too---a big WOW
ReplyDeleteOh my god. Really tantalizing that was! :P :D nice!
ReplyDeleteUhh ! I liked it ! ;)
ReplyDeleteLoved the choice of words Alka :)
ReplyDeleteMesmerising....Alka!!!
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